Summer Shouts

bare feet kick up dust
               on flower speckled pathways
                              powdered summer shouts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Beaufort Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 4:08 AM
Danny, a very positive spin on dust. Smiles!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 4:16 PM
appreciate the childhood essence within this Haiku...especially liked 'powdered summer shouts.'
Derden Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 6:38 PM
Thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 9:08 AM
What a cute fun ku
Derden Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 10:07 AM
Thank you...I was going for that barefoot summer fun I used to daily enjoy as a kid.
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