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Summer Senryu

cool waters embrace hot, penetrating body - galloping ripples

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Date: 5/21/2016 12:07:00 PM

- Congratulations on your Summer poems, David - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David De La Croes
Date: 5/21/2016 1:23:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. Congratulations to you, too!

Date: 5/21/2016 9:04:00 AM

Well done, David; this is lovely and suggestive. Congratulations...a truly deserved win! ~ Regards // paul

David De La Croes
Date: 5/21/2016 1:20:00 PM

Thank you, Paul, and congratulations on your winning work! Go well, david

Date: 5/20/2016 8:00:00 PM

Sensuous - lovely! Congratulations!

David De La Croes
Date: 5/21/2016 1:18:00 PM

Thank you, Kim, and congratulations to you, too. It appears that we had the same idea in mind for our entries!

Date: 5/20/2016 7:17:00 PM

I loved that last line so much, DAvid!! I was imagining a horse running through the waves. COOL Senryu and congrats.

David De La Croes
Date: 5/21/2016 1:15:00 PM

Thank you for a wonderful contest, Andrea, and you consideration of my poem. Much appreciated, David

Date: 5/19/2016 1:51:00 PM

Thanks, SO. Appreciate your support, David