Summer Senryu

cool waters embrace
hot, penetrating body -
galloping ripples
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Andresen Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 12:07 PM
- Congratulations on your Summer poems, David - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De La Croes Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 1:23 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. Congratulations to you, too!
Callus Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 9:04 AM
Well done, David; this is lovely and suggestive. Congratulations...a truly deserved win! ~ Regards // paul
De La Croes Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 1:20 PM
Thank you, Paul, and congratulations on your winning work! Go well, david
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 8:00 PM
Sensuous - lovely! Congratulations!
De La Croes Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 1:18 PM
Thank you, Kim, and congratulations to you, too. It appears that we had the same idea in mind for our entries!
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 7:17 PM
I loved that last line so much, DAvid!! I was imagining a horse running through the waves. COOL Senryu and congrats.
De La Croes Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 1:15 PM
Thank you for a wonderful contest, Andrea, and you consideration of my poem. Much appreciated, David
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May 19, 2016 at 1:51 PM
Thanks, SO. Appreciate your support, David
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