JC Brul Poet Haiku

Summer Seaside Dance

seagulls' wings flitter 
wild waves hustle into cliffs ~
jazzing tropic sun
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shaggy mangroves sway
ivory clouds twist and twirl~
waltzing 'neath June sky



 
6/25/2020

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Jan Allison January 11, 2021 at 2:01 PM dropping by again to say many congrats on your win;-) hugs Jan xx

Anisha Dutta July 13, 2020 at 11:37 PM Too good to impress. Blessing. Congrats.

Aditi Mishra June 30, 2020 at 3:11 PM Your haiku is brilliant! Seagulls, waves near cliffs, swaying mangroves, ivory clouds..stunning imagery. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love. Keep writing and inspiring :)

Funom Makama June 29, 2020 at 3:09 PM A great Haiku. Congratulations on your win. This is well deserved.

John Watt June 29, 2020 at 2:58 PM I liked your "ivory clouds twist and twirl". Congrats on your win in the summer haiku contest, JCB ~ John

Jeanne Mcgee June 29, 2020 at 9:37 AM Wonderfully penned imagery...each line gives a different summer view. Congrats on your top placement.

V. Deepa June 29, 2020 at 6:27 AM Lovely write:-) Congratulations on your win mam:-) Keep writing.Keep inspiring. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa

Jenish Somadas June 29, 2020 at 2:09 AM ivory clouds twist and twirl.. Beautifully penned.. Congratulations on your win..

Jenna Logan June 28, 2020 at 7:51 PM A very nice set of Haiku, JCB.

Jan Allison June 28, 2020 at 7:06 PM such lovely summer imagery, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper June 28, 2020 at 4:50 PM Congratulations on your win, Burl, great imagery. Hugs Eve

Tania Kitchin June 28, 2020 at 3:53 PM Congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely and clever haiku!

Andrea Dietrich June 27, 2020 at 5:11 PM Love the dance imagery and metaphor in these haiku!

Arturo Michael June 26, 2020 at 2:27 PM Lovely play of imagery and emotions...

Regina Mcintosh June 25, 2020 at 6:43 AM Lovely Haikus, dear friend... Bless you always, Love, Gina

Vijay Pandit June 25, 2020 at 6:41 AM Lovely images of summer, JCB. All the best.

Mahtab Bangalee June 25, 2020 at 6:00 AM beautiful summer sea in the poetic writings... beautiful haiku