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Summer Seaside Dance

seagulls' wings flitter wild waves hustle into cliffs ~ jazzing tropic sun ~ shaggy mangroves sway ivory clouds twist and twirl~ waltzing 'neath June sky 6/25/2020

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Date: 1/11/2021 2:01:00 PM
dropping by again to say many congrats on your win;-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/13/2020 11:37:00 PM
Too good to impress. Blessing. Congrats.
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Date: 6/30/2020 3:11:00 PM
Your haiku is brilliant! Seagulls, waves near cliffs, swaying mangroves, ivory clouds..stunning imagery. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love. Keep writing and inspiring :)
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Date: 6/29/2020 3:09:00 PM
A great Haiku. Congratulations on your win. This is well deserved.
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Date: 6/29/2020 2:58:00 PM
I liked your "ivory clouds twist and twirl". Congrats on your win in the summer haiku contest, JCB ~ John
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Date: 6/29/2020 9:37:00 AM
Wonderfully penned imagery...each line gives a different summer view. Congrats on your top placement.
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Date: 6/29/2020 6:27:00 AM
Lovely write:-) Congratulations on your win mam:-) Keep writing.Keep inspiring. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa
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Date: 6/29/2020 2:09:00 AM
ivory clouds twist and twirl.. Beautifully penned.. Congratulations on your win..
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Date: 6/28/2020 7:51:00 PM
A very nice set of Haiku, JCB.
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Date: 6/28/2020 7:06:00 PM
such lovely summer imagery, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/28/2020 4:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Burl, great imagery. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/28/2020 3:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely and clever haiku!
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Date: 6/27/2020 5:11:00 PM
Love the dance imagery and metaphor in these haiku!
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Date: 6/26/2020 2:27:00 PM
Lovely play of imagery and emotions...
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Date: 6/25/2020 6:43:00 AM
Lovely Haikus, dear friend... Bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 6/25/2020 6:41:00 AM
Lovely images of summer, JCB. All the best.
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Date: 6/25/2020 6:00:00 AM
beautiful summer sea in the poetic writings... beautiful haiku
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