Summer Rumble

Sultry summer days
In an oppressive heat wave
Cloudbursts stole a chance
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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August 13, 2008 at 4:21 PM
Nice use of this short format. Those cloud burst are a welcome relief after weeks of hot temps. I really like the last line in this one. Thank you for sharing your creativity with us and for taking to comment on my haiku. Keep on writing! Karen
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June 14, 2008 at 12:29 AM
Vivid write Laura.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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June 13, 2008 at 4:34 PM
Hi Laura I love this write, sometimes it does not take a lot of words to say what one needs to say, take care D-nyce
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June 12, 2008 at 11:32 AM
Oh, the rumble of that thunder. We've experienced a lot of that recently here in NJ and thankfully too because it meant a cool front was behind the heat. Perfect form and a terrific read. Michael
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June 12, 2008 at 5:20 AM
Love the beginning of summer storms. Great haiku. Love, Shar
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June 11, 2008 at 9:25 AM
Hey, we don't have to shovel heat. But those cloudbursts do help. Vince
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June 11, 2008 at 3:19 AM
Well done haiku, we had the rumble lastnight here! LOVE storms! XO Kristin
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June 10, 2008 at 10:25 PM
Laura , great Haiku description of a " two~faced" Summer day...
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