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Summer Rumble

Sultry summer days In an oppressive heat wave Cloudbursts stole a chance

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Date: 8/13/2008 4:21:00 PM

Nice use of this short format. Those cloud burst are a welcome relief after weeks of hot temps. I really like the last line in this one. Thank you for sharing your creativity with us and for taking to comment on my haiku. Keep on writing! Karen

Brian Strand

Date: 6/14/2008 12:29:00 AM

Vivid write Laura.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Deneen White

Date: 6/13/2008 4:34:00 PM

Hi Laura I love this write, sometimes it does not take a lot of words to say what one needs to say, take care D-nyce

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 6/12/2008 11:32:00 AM

Oh, the rumble of that thunder. We've experienced a lot of that recently here in NJ and thankfully too because it meant a cool front was behind the heat. Perfect form and a terrific read. Michael

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/12/2008 5:20:00 AM

Love the beginning of summer storms. Great haiku. Love, Shar

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/11/2008 9:25:00 AM

Hey, we don't have to shovel heat. But those cloudbursts do help. Vince

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 6/11/2008 3:19:00 AM

Well done haiku, we had the rumble lastnight here! LOVE storms! XO Kristin

Sean Kelly

Date: 6/10/2008 10:25:00 PM

Laura , great Haiku description of a " two~faced" Summer day...