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Summer Rain Storm

Summer Rain Storm / ( Spencerian Stanza Competition ) A sense of expectation filled the air. We walked through balmy sheltered forest glade. My love for him I gladly did declare, His glance descended ; no response was made. And empathetic nature felt betrayed. Beneath the darkened mood of clouds in chase Familiar eyes now mere regret displayed . His love had disappeared without a trace, And summer rain poured down upon my tear-stained face. 09/07/18

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Date: 7/12/2018 1:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 7/11/2018 11:57:00 AM
A very nicely written poem, Wendy, congrats on your placement. John
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Date: 7/10/2018 9:50:00 PM
Lovely, indeed. Congrats on a richly-deserved winner here. Best wishes, gw
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Date: 7/10/2018 9:34:00 AM
Fictional I hope. So sad. Well captured! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/10/2018 8:41:00 AM
aww... sad this moment in time. the tears and the rain a blend of melancholy. very well written and telling.
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Date: 7/9/2018 7:38:00 PM
Hi Wendy.. Another day, another airport. So how do I fight the long sit and wait? Your incredible (and interesting) write of course! You made my delay sing with your creativity!! Come see me if you get a chance.. I'm releasing a secret!
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Date: 7/9/2018 6:24:00 PM
This is very lovely Wendy! Congratulations on your win in this short list. : )
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Date: 7/9/2018 5:37:00 PM
Like a scent, the storm remains in thought from disenchantment! Congrats, Wendy!
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Date: 7/9/2018 3:59:00 PM
Oh so sad, but so beautifully written, Wendy. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
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Date: 7/9/2018 2:50:00 PM
Nice write...all the best Wendy
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Date: 7/9/2018 2:09:00 PM
Lovely, Wendy. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 7/9/2018 11:49:00 AM
such lovely sad imagery Wendy, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/9/2018 11:19:00 AM
Wendy, congratulations on your 7th Place win! This was a tough contest to judge. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter.
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