Summer Rain

After blasting fire on the earth
when sun felt tired,
It is a little effort from summer rain
to put off the fire.

Summer sun stolen water
from puddle, river and ocean,
Tears come out from summer rain
with extreme grief and pain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Salehi Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 2:25 AM
Sad summer..... we need a storm ....
Bankson Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 6:47 PM
Very well written.I hate to admit it but I had to read it twice to comprehend.Great piece of art.Jai
Black Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 10:44 AM
Short, sweet and sensational. It's a very decent write. You have explained the water cycle in a very miraculous way. The way you have designed this poem is quite impressive. Keep on going.
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 5:41 PM
nice how you got the rain from the different bodies of water., Nice one, Manmath
A   Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 10:50 AM
Good morning Manmath, I'm happy you enjoyed my new poem. Sometimes, I get pressured by the poets to post a new poem... Love LINDA
A   Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 9:11 AM
Manmath, stunning new write. You painted a wonderful yet, sorrow world of tears. A 7...Linda
Dalei Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 9:37 AM
Ur comment is itself a poem Linda. Sorrow world of tear.......Wow. Thanks a lot.
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 7:02 AM
You went above and beyond 575 syllables in haiku form. is that something new and original? I always love warm rain, walk in it. You sure could write a lengthy poem on it. Welcome to ps dear one.
Dalei Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 9:38 AM
I admit my mistake. it is corrected.
Dalei Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 7:12 AM
Hi Iris, Thanks a lot for ur valuable comment. I will try to write a poem on summer rain........hugs
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