Summer Rain

The dancing raindrops
Race to meet the barren land
To quench the earth's thirst
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 5:34 PM
Nice one, Larry. ..Ralph
Spence Sr Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 3:07 PM
I can see the imagery of the rush. The touch is also fascinating as it quenches the thirst of the land. Great job! Joseph
Clark Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 4:28 AM
Beautiful! J
Devonshire Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 2:29 AM
Another great haiku, Larry, and a tribute to your versatility! Love, Carolyn
Bourner Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 7:41 PM
love it, keep up the excellent writing!------Ell
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