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Summer Oak

magestic grand oak providing shelter in rain attracts lightning bolt magestic grand oak providing shade in summer relieves scorched field hands magestic grand oak providing refuge from stress creates peaceful state magestic grand oak providing recreation brings joy to children magestic grand oak providing tasty acorns feeds happy squirrels magestic grand Creator providing nature's gifts shows His love for us Revised July 13, 2016

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Date: 2/5/2017 11:34:00 AM
Right outside of my window is a 300 year old oak tree I just looked up at it and smiled, a knowing smile! Thanks!
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Date: 4/23/2016 9:08:00 AM
Excellent haiku, Susan! The imagery is amazing and I love the surprise ending! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 4/22/2016 5:31:00 PM
Exhilarating!
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Susan Palli
Date: 4/23/2016 2:59:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/30/2016 6:51:00 PM
The best of luck in the contest, Susan... Love LINDA
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Susan Palli
Date: 4/8/2016 11:52:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 3/29/2016 3:44:00 PM
you got the syllable count down! I too love the irony!!
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Susan Palli
Date: 4/8/2016 11:52:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 3/29/2016 8:42:00 AM
cleverly penned - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Susan Palli
Date: 4/8/2016 11:51:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 3/29/2016 8:34:00 AM
Awesome way to title the poem and I love the irony in this haiku. Thank you for sharing! Xx
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Susan Palli
Date: 4/8/2016 11:51:00 AM
Thanks!

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