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Summer Nights

Summer nights Bright white light Laughing friends Evening thread's Alcohol consumed Conversation resumed All worries lost At no single cost Fire burning lightly Stars shining brightly Dusk will soon turn to dawn Myself I will yawn Wave my friends goodbye Go to bed, get shut eye

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/17/2024 8:23:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/31/2016 6:41:00 PM

Sounds like a wonderful evening David I enjoyed your rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 5/29/2016 1:15:00 AM

You write like me a little David. This is lovely. Welcome to Soup.