L Milton Hankins Poet Triolet

Summer Motion

Summer Motion beneath the stars 
Comes to our town on July Fourth
Rock music by forgotten music czars,
Summer Motion beneath the stars
The heavy twang of electric guitars,
Old hits and loud fireworks go forth
Summer Motion beneath the stars,
Comes to our town on July Fourth. 

Written July 9, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger July 11, 2022 at 8:59 PM I want to come visit you some 4th of July! L Milton Hankins July 12, 2022 at 7:46 AM I always love company, Caren. Next year, maybe?

Ann Foster July 10, 2022 at 7:14 AM I love the 4th... great write... excellent fun. Ann L Milton Hankins July 10, 2022 at 9:08 AM Thanks, Ann.

Gershon Wolf July 9, 2022 at 8:46 PM 'Heavy twang of electric guitars... rock music from forgotten music czars.' That's what I think too. The sooner forgotten, the better too! lol. L Milton Hankins July 10, 2022 at 9:14 AM That's my opinion in a nutshell!