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Summer Moon

Subtle and mild. Summer love came. Answering our cry. In swift reply. Marooned. In mid-summer's bloom. Secrets rendered. Illuminated under moon. Radiant nights. Pandered to our request. Forever and this moment. This life and the next.

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Date: 3/30/2024 3:49:00 PM
Awesome write here many blessings.
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Date: 10/3/2023 8:01:00 PM
Flows nicely and like the way you group words in to give poem extra oomph. Nicely done. Also like the fact this started strongly with Subtle and mild, getting readers attention, ending same way. Best regards David in NZ. PS Hope you stay in the the soup for a while. A good place to develop your craft.
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Date: 10/9/2023 9:33:00 AM
Thank you David. I appreciate the compliment. Def plan on staying in the soup aa well! : )

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