Summer Memories

If I could have caught
the poetry inside of
her beautiful smile.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Neels Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 5:25 AM
Enjoyed your haiku -- Wilma
Rhinem Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 2:30 AM
Smile ~ "Yes," it seems perhaps that what this soft and lovely verse is saying is -- that maybe Your Treasures had this beautiful summer and that, if only You would have created the verses that lived amid Your Beautiful Heart When, "Dreams & Love," soared perhaps through Your Priceless Soul ~ Smile, did I get it right? ~ "Somewhat Bittersweet Precious Madison" ~ "My Love Always," John! ~ Smile, there will be lots more summers dear; believe it ~ "Smile & Be Happy;" Bye Dear!:) ~
Mehta Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 12:17 AM
Nice haiku with great images.
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