Summer Magic

midday summer storm
sunburst plies its charmer’s touch-
        steam rising from road
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 7:57 AM
Congrats on your win!!
Gasun Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 1:49 AM
A great haiku with magically beautiful image of summer! thank u so much for sharing and congratulations on this great poem and awesome win my dear friend david! love and hugs, Leonora
Mehta Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 12:33 AM
Nice images of rain, david
A   Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 10:33 AM
nice win... thank you..Linda
Gibson Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 6:08 PM
Lovely...I can smell the rain.
Dietrich Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 3:47 PM
Nice one!! Very descriptive.
Callus Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 4:15 PM
Very observant! Very good write, too. // paul
Mohn Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 7:39 PM
Thanks Paul..always great to get comments from you..very appreciated
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