Summer Lovers

As this summer draws to a close,
All the lovers know,
That they soon will have to say goodbye.
They cant make this easy no matter how hard they might try.
From the beaches of California,
To the sands of Florida.
You can see all the different summer lovers,
Enjoying their last bit of summer,
And their last taste of love under the covers.
Cause they know,
that once this summer has come to a close,
They will be back in their hometown,
Back to their old lives,Of long works hours and school clowns.
But in the back of their minds, They wont forget what they found,
They wont forget this summer,
The summer they found someone who loved them like no other.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/28/2014 4:37:00 AM
I loved the line "I wont forget this summer." It was so personal and immediate-not a memory of a lost summer, but one about to be left behind. Good work, Ettie... j
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 1/10/2015 12:40:00 PM
THX:)-Love Ettie
Date: 10/30/2014 3:48:00 PM
summer lovin happened so fast - shame these romances don't always last but they are always in your memories - lovely rhyme Ettie:-) Hugs jan xx
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 11/8/2014 11:46:00 AM
So True Mam....Summer went so fast but I look forward to fall:)-Love Ettie
Date: 9/22/2014 8:34:00 PM
Graceful and delightful one. I miss the summer too somewhat in sunny CA xD DWB 7/7
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 9/24/2014 4:06:00 PM
Very sunny Here In Miss:):)-Love Ettie
Date: 9/9/2014 3:20:00 PM
Summer of 2014 is gone. Summer loves - what a thing to remember. You struck a chord in me with this one. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 9/12/2014 9:27:00 AM
Well Im glad you liked it Matthew:) Yes it is gone.... I hope yours was nice-Love Ettie
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