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Summer Love

Summer Love

Shores draped in white sand linens; beaches beckon, "Lovers come lay."
Salt perfume, ocean music, moonlit waters their embeance.
Treasuring star framed reflections, waves of passion.... Summer love.



Contest: sino strings
Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi
June 11, 2014

Copyright © Arlene Smith | Year Posted 2014

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/3/2014 10:31:00 PM this is deliciously pictured. I bet it would have scored higher if you spelled that one word correctly (ambience) . Congrats for your win. Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 7/4/2014 9:43:00 AM Thank you for the sweet comment, Andrea!.. Ha! Where is spell check when you need it! Never my strong suit lol.. Hugs.. Arlene

Ct Duet Date: 7/3/2014 8:57:00 PM How wonderful Congrats Tim Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 7/4/2014 9:41:00 AM Thank you, Tim!. Hugs.. Arlene

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/3/2014 11:41:00 AM Wonderful win Arlene,...Linda Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/3/2014 6:19:00 AM I really enjoyed the imagery in the poem, Arlene, Congrats on the win Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 7/3/2014 9:36:00 AM Thank you, Dr. Mehta, my friend!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/2/2014 8:13:00 PM i like your second line Arlene... :D and this well sweet :) COngratulations .. :) Login to Reply

Theresa Stephens Date: 7/2/2014 5:25:00 PM Hi Arlene, I felt seduced by your 'salt perfume' and 'star framed reflections'. to want to tread along your well crafted beach scenerio and recreate my youth again. Well done. Regards Theresa xx Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 7/3/2014 9:33:00 AM Thank you so much for the generous comments, Theresa!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 7/2/2014 4:06:00 PM Hi Arlene, congratulations on a well-deserved fine win! This piece has such magnificent imagery! Beautiful write! Kindest regards. Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 7/3/2014 9:31:00 AM Thank you so much, Pandita. Hugs.. Arlene

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 7/2/2014 2:14:00 PM Really wonderful Arlene ! Loved this imagery ,, deserved win my dear friend ! Big congrats ! Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 7/2/2014 2:20:00 PM Thank you, Dr. Sharma.. Hugs.. Arlene

Paul Callus Date: 7/2/2014 12:39:00 PM Congratulations, Arlene! If I were the judge I'd have placed you higher! cu // paul Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 7/2/2014 1:17:00 PM Thank you, Paul, my friend. Honestly, I am tickled and surprised every time my name appears anywhere on a winners list with such amazing talent as on this site!. Hugs.. Arlene

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/19/2014 6:09:00 PM Interesting entry into the contest..Way to go..Very unique..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 6/19/2014 6:28:00 PM Thanks, to you as well, Sara!.. Hugs, Arlene

Paul Callus Date: 6/13/2014 6:34:00 AM Hi Arlene! As far as I'm concerned you managed to present the ideal atmosphere for summer love; an appeal to all the senses. [Do not under-rate your work...let others judge:)] // paul Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 6/13/2014 6:39:00 AM Thank you so much my friend.. I truly appreciate you taking time to read and comment.. Hugs. Arlene..

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/12/2014 8:50:00 AM you capture a summer love completely, Arlene. Well done! Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 6/12/2014 9:19:00 AM Thanks, Andrea.. I always look forward to you stopping by.. Hugs.. Arlene....

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/12/2014 1:44:00 AM Romantic and summer love nicely defined, Arlene Login to Reply Arlene Smith Date: 6/12/2014 6:02:00 AM Thank you, Dr. Mehta.. I had in mind to read more of your writings this morning... Wishing I could just read poetry all day. Never thought I would say that..Arlene..