Arlene Smith Poet Sijo

Summer Love

Summer Love

Shores draped in white sand linens; beaches beckon, "Lovers come lay."
Salt perfume, ocean music, moonlit waters their embeance.
Treasuring star framed reflections, waves of passion.... Summer love.



Contest: sino strings
Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi
June 11, 2014

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Andrea Dietrich July 3, 2014 at 10:31 PM this is deliciously pictured. I bet it would have scored higher if you spelled that one word correctly (ambience) . Congrats for your win. Arlene Smith July 4, 2014 at 9:43 AM Thank you for the sweet comment, Andrea!.. Ha! Where is spell check when you need it! Never my strong suit lol.. Hugs.. Arlene

Ct Duet July 3, 2014 at 8:57 PM How wonderful Congrats Tim Arlene Smith July 4, 2014 at 9:41 AM Thank you, Tim!. Hugs.. Arlene

Poet Destroyer A July 3, 2014 at 11:41 AM Wonderful win Arlene,...Linda

Dr.Ram Mehta July 3, 2014 at 6:19 AM I really enjoyed the imagery in the poem, Arlene, Congrats on the win Arlene Smith July 3, 2014 at 9:36 AM Thank you, Dr. Mehta, my friend!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 2, 2014 at 8:13 PM i like your second line Arlene... :D and this well sweet :) COngratulations .. :)

Theresa Stephens July 2, 2014 at 5:25 PM Hi Arlene, I felt seduced by your 'salt perfume' and 'star framed reflections'. to want to tread along your well crafted beach scenerio and recreate my youth again. Well done. Regards Theresa xx Arlene Smith July 3, 2014 at 9:33 AM Thank you so much for the generous comments, Theresa!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Pandita Sietesantos July 2, 2014 at 4:06 PM Hi Arlene, congratulations on a well-deserved fine win! This piece has such magnificent imagery! Beautiful write! Kindest regards. Arlene Smith July 3, 2014 at 9:31 AM Thank you so much, Pandita. Hugs.. Arlene

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 2, 2014 at 2:14 PM Really wonderful Arlene ! Loved this imagery ,, deserved win my dear friend ! Big congrats ! Arlene Smith July 2, 2014 at 2:20 PM Thank you, Dr. Sharma.. Hugs.. Arlene

Paul Callus July 2, 2014 at 12:39 PM Congratulations, Arlene! If I were the judge I'd have placed you higher! cu // paul Arlene Smith July 2, 2014 at 1:17 PM Thank you, Paul, my friend. Honestly, I am tickled and surprised every time my name appears anywhere on a winners list with such amazing talent as on this site!. Hugs.. Arlene

Sara Kendrick June 19, 2014 at 6:09 PM Interesting entry into the contest..Way to go..Very unique..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Arlene Smith June 19, 2014 at 6:28 PM Thanks, to you as well, Sara!.. Hugs, Arlene

Paul Callus June 13, 2014 at 6:34 AM Hi Arlene! As far as I'm concerned you managed to present the ideal atmosphere for summer love; an appeal to all the senses. [Do not under-rate your work...let others judge:)] // paul Arlene Smith June 13, 2014 at 6:39 AM Thank you so much my friend.. I truly appreciate you taking time to read and comment.. Hugs. Arlene..

Andrea Dietrich June 12, 2014 at 8:50 AM you capture a summer love completely, Arlene. Well done! Arlene Smith June 12, 2014 at 9:19 AM Thanks, Andrea.. I always look forward to you stopping by.. Hugs.. Arlene....

Dr.Ram Mehta June 12, 2014 at 1:44 AM Romantic and summer love nicely defined, Arlene Arlene Smith June 12, 2014 at 6:02 AM Thank you, Dr. Mehta.. I had in mind to read more of your writings this morning... Wishing I could just read poetry all day. Never thought I would say that..Arlene..