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Summer Love

Summer Love
Shores draped in white sand linens; beaches beckon, "Lovers come lay."
Salt perfume, ocean music, moonlit waters their embeance.
Treasuring star framed reflections, waves of passion.... Summer love.
Contest: sino strings Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi June 11, 2014

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Date: 7/3/2014 10:31:00 PM
this is deliciously pictured. I bet it would have scored higher if you spelled that one word correctly (ambience) . Congrats for your win.
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/4/2014 9:43:00 AM
Thank you for the sweet comment, Andrea!.. Ha! Where is spell check when you need it! Never my strong suit lol.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/3/2014 8:57:00 PM
How wonderful Congrats Tim
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Date: 7/4/2014 9:41:00 AM
Thank you, Tim!. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/3/2014 11:41:00 AM
Wonderful win Arlene,...Linda
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Date: 7/3/2014 6:19:00 AM
I really enjoyed the imagery in the poem, Arlene, Congrats on the win
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/3/2014 9:36:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Mehta, my friend!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/3/2014 3:44:00 AM
Your second line has it all... definitely. Wish I could drown in just that.. Congrats on your write and HM Dutch greetings.
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/3/2014 9:35:00 AM
Thank you, Elly, my friend.. Wish I were there right now.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/2/2014 8:13:00 PM
i like your second line Arlene... :D and this well sweet :) COngratulations .. :)
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Date: 7/2/2014 5:25:00 PM
Hi Arlene, I felt seduced by your 'salt perfume' and 'star framed reflections'. to want to tread along your well crafted beach scenerio and recreate my youth again. Well done. Regards Theresa xx
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/3/2014 9:33:00 AM
Thank you so much for the generous comments, Theresa!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/2/2014 4:06:00 PM
Hi Arlene, congratulations on a well-deserved fine win! This piece has such magnificent imagery! Beautiful write! Kindest regards.
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/3/2014 9:31:00 AM
Thank you so much, Pandita. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/2/2014 2:14:00 PM
Really wonderful Arlene ! Loved this imagery ,, deserved win my dear friend ! Big congrats !
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/2/2014 2:20:00 PM
Thank you, Dr. Sharma.. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 7/2/2014 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations, Arlene! If I were the judge I'd have placed you higher! cu // paul
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/2/2014 1:17:00 PM
Thank you, Paul, my friend. Honestly, I am tickled and surprised every time my name appears anywhere on a winners list with such amazing talent as on this site!. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 6/19/2014 6:09:00 PM
Interesting entry into the contest..Way to go..Very unique..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/19/2014 6:28:00 PM
Thanks, to you as well, Sara!.. Hugs, Arlene
Date: 6/13/2014 6:34:00 AM
Hi Arlene! As far as I'm concerned you managed to present the ideal atmosphere for summer love; an appeal to all the senses. [Do not under-rate your work...let others judge:)] // paul
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/13/2014 6:39:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend.. I truly appreciate you taking time to read and comment.. Hugs. Arlene..
Date: 6/12/2014 8:50:00 AM
you capture a summer love completely, Arlene. Well done!
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/12/2014 9:19:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea.. I always look forward to you stopping by.. Hugs.. Arlene....
Date: 6/12/2014 1:44:00 AM
Romantic and summer love nicely defined, Arlene
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/12/2014 6:02:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Mehta.. I had in mind to read more of your writings this morning... Wishing I could just read poetry all day. Never thought I would say that..Arlene..