Summer Lily

Bees buzz lazily  
Towards the lilies pale, white
Drooping with pollen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 1:02 PM
lovely imagery Brahn:-) hugs jan xx
Bailey Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 1:31 PM
Thank you! I cannot tell you how happy I am to see comments so soon after writing a poem!
Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 12:51 PM
Beautiful imagery, Brahn.
Bailey Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 1:31 PM
Thank you! Coming from someone who writes Haiku means I lot
Sands Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 12:42 PM
Nicely written! Well done :)
Bailey Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 1:32 PM
Thank you!
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