Summer Is Over (Haiku)

For The Summer is Over Haiku contest:

Sunsets come early
Leaves fade and begin to fall
Too soon summer flees
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chamma Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 6:01 PM
Too soon indeed =) Great Haiku. Good luck! Looking forward to reading more of your work. Farah
Drover Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 9:25 AM
Thanks everyone for the comments! The reality of this poem is definitely hitting home as the leaves begin to fall....sigh...the season was too short as always!
Keogh Jr. Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 9:21 AM
Yes, they do and we lose trhe light far too soon. Almost a metaphor for life? Thank you for your gracious remark. Regards, Gerard
Brown Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 9:26 AM
~No tell me it is not so~Another day of reading the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I enjoyed reading yours today T.L. Have a wonderful weekend. I need to see if I can find some inspiration this weekend. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
August 12, 2010 at 9:00 PM
A nice write on summer is over, T.L.
Sweetheart Avatar
August 12, 2010 at 4:11 PM
Wonderful entry T.L. good luck in Irma's new contest.. lots of imagery in your lines.. my entry is "Fond Farewell"..luv..
Falotico Avatar
August 12, 2010 at 2:38 PM
well written, good luck..
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