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Summer Is Here

Clouds in the sky drift lazily Sparkling patches of blue linger, Mind daydreaming so hazily Songbirds chirping a moodswinger, Summer is here A time for cheer. Evening sounding so jazzily, Recording of a scat singer Distant stars twinkle snazzily, I am an accomplished swinger Have no complaints, And few restraints.
[syllables checked by HMS; rhymes checked with Rhyme Zone] THIRD PLACE WINNER Written May 31, 2022 Submitted to “Posie” Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet

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Date: 7/1/2022 2:15:00 AM
It's my pleasure to congratulate you on your winning spot in Emile's contest. Well done, Milt.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/1/2022 8:51:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jenna. I so appreciate your comment.
Date: 6/30/2022 12:30:00 PM
Congrats on this winner in Emile's contest. Way to go. Sara
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/30/2022 1:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sara. I apprecite your response to my poem.
Date: 6/30/2022 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations on this win. A Wonderful summer write. Have a great/blessed day/weekend....................
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/30/2022 1:09:00 PM
Thanks, Paula. Your comments are always uplifting.
Date: 6/30/2022 12:06:00 PM
Congratulation on your win, Milt, you accomplished swinger you. ;-) Terry
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Terry Flood
Date: 6/30/2022 1:13:00 PM
I’m sure everyone took it in good faith, Milt. We never did believe those rumours… honest!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/30/2022 1:10:00 PM
Thanks, Terry. Somehow I think I was dreaming, or daydreaming, when I wrote that line...now that I look back at it.
Date: 6/30/2022 9:56:00 AM
A happy space to be in! Congrats on your win, Milt!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/30/2022 9:59:00 AM
Thanks so much, Unseeking Seeker.
Date: 6/30/2022 9:54:00 AM
Congrats on your contest placement, snazzily written indeed!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/30/2022 9:59:00 AM
Thank you, Hat. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 6/30/2022 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations Milt! Your descriptive summer poem earned “Thrid” place in my contest. This was a very challenging contest but your poem rose to a podium finish, well done my friend, Emile.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/30/2022 10:01:00 AM
Thanks so much, Emile. So totally unexpected, but I am so pleased. I enjoy writing for your contests, which I always find very challenging. Hope summer has come your way!
Date: 6/2/2022 4:01:00 AM
I love the word moodswinger; I assume it is your own. "Songbirds chirping a moodswinger," and it is FANTASTIC!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/2/2022 10:00:00 AM
Actually, it was "humdinger," but I learned that didn't rhyme, so I looked through a list of rhymes and found "moodswinger" which worked just as well. Maybe better.
Date: 5/31/2022 12:27:00 PM
So, you're a self-proclaimed swinger? Is Scat a person who sings? Sorry, I'm not familiar.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/31/2022 12:31:00 PM
Hmmm...must I confess? Not really, but I do know how to have fun, Jenna. "Scat" is a form of singing made most popular by Jazz singer Ella Fitzgerald. I think maybe Sammy Davis Jr., as well, and a few more imitators that don't come readily to mind. I hope Emile knows what it is!
Date: 5/31/2022 12:27:00 PM
Hello Milton, today it feels lie summer. A beautiful day. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/31/2022 1:00:00 PM
Hello Milton, This is my time of the year to Also my fav. season. Enjoy your day my friend.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/31/2022 12:33:00 PM
Yes, indeed. We are in the mid-nineties here. They are repaving the street in front of my house, and I don't know how those construction workers stand the heat. I love it, though. This is my time of the year!
Date: 5/31/2022 12:24:00 PM
It poured down here today, if you got any spare sunshine send it over. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/31/2022 12:34:00 PM
Really, Tom? Well, I'll put in an order and see how it goes. We had a very, very wet spring, so I'm delighted to see these hot days. The last time I was in England/Wales/Scotland the only warm, not-so-dreary day we had was in Lockerbie. I thought that was very unusual.
Date: 5/31/2022 11:36:00 AM
good luck in the contest!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/31/2022 11:55:00 AM
Thanks, Marco. I'll need it.

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