Summer In Winter

winter's muffled voice
summer hangs on forever
thirsting for snowflakes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kimathi Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 5:38 PM
I love the way you've portrayed the color of seasons in your haiku. Congrats Robyn, for having your poem featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!!! ;-)
Arnone Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 10:22 PM
Love the image of summer thirsting for snowflakes. Nice haiku.
Austin Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 10:07 AM
In this heat I'm listening to that muffled voice. Congrats, daver
A   Avatar
December 30, 2015 at 11:42 PM
Robyn, I'm just dropping by to let you know, You are now one of my favorite poets. Adding you to my favorite list. Happy New Years. Thank you for reading my poems. Love LINDA
A  Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 3:51 AM
Hi Robyn, what did you mean by Fly in the house? :) HUGS
Campbell Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 9:00 AM
A real fly. It's winter. We're not supposed to have them. :-)
A   Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 7:48 PM
Like Skat on the bottom, I too thirst for a real winter.. LINDA
A  Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 3:19 PM
I like the last imagery, I live in South Texas, so here we thirst for winter... SKAT
Campbell Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 3:41 PM
I'm in NC. And thanks to El Nino we thirst for winter too. There's a fly in the house today. :-) Thanks for reading.
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