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Summer Hiku For Brian

zephyr breezes by as I lounge in my garden with eyelids heavy

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Date: 8/5/2023 8:08:00 PM
A delightful scene that I can easily imagine. Congrats on your win, Andrea! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/3/2023 8:23:00 AM
Dear Andrea, I love these moments lounging with daydreams on the cusp of a breezy doze! A summer delight! Your imagery captures the scene with poetic finesse. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/2/2023 7:39:00 AM
Very descriptive. I like it.
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Date: 8/1/2023 3:47:00 PM
zephyr? Must pull a dictionary out for that one. A gentle breeze.
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Date: 8/1/2023 10:20:00 AM
A lovely write. Summer/gardens go together. I enjoyed reading this one.  Have a great day in your garden.............
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Date: 8/1/2023 2:40:00 AM
Nice:)
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Date: 7/31/2023 9:44:00 PM
very sensitive haiku, enjoyed yann
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