Summer Hiku For Brian

zephyr breezes by
as I lounge in my garden
with eyelids heavy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Merryman Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 8:08 PM
A delightful scene that I can easily imagine. Congrats on your win, Andrea! Blessings, Kim M
Ashley Avatar
August 3, 2023 at 8:23 AM
Dear Andrea, I love these moments lounging with daydreams on the cusp of a breezy doze! A summer delight! Your imagery captures the scene with poetic finesse. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Bayles Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 7:39 AM
Very descriptive. I like it.
Hawley Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 3:47 PM
zephyr? Must pull a dictionary out for that one. A gentle breeze.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 10:20 AM
A lovely write. Summer/gardens go together. I enjoyed reading this one.  Have a great day in your garden.............
Daniel Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 2:40 AM
Nice:)
Rolland Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 9:44 PM
very sensitive haiku, enjoyed yann
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