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Summer Hiku 10

            Summer Hiku 10

brown cedar waxwing

	devouring privet berry   \
	                                      \
		    ground is her   d         n.
                                          u         i
                                          s    t    b
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Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 10:53 AM
lol…ground is her dustbin! Clever…congrats!
Guptar Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 3:13 AM
Back again with thanks for appreciating the above write and for your kind wishes, dear poetess. Wish you a pleasant week-end.
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 3:44 PM
Cool shape at the bottom of the ku. Well done
Guptar Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 8:50 AM
Thanks for appreciating the above write dear poetess. Wish you a pleasant day filled with light.
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