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Summer Haiku

in strawberry shade pina colada blushing… paper umbrella 16 May 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/21/2016 3:18:00 PM
Excellent Haiku, David. Congratulations on your nice placement. Sandra
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Date: 5/21/2016 12:04:00 PM
- Congratulations on your Summer poems, David - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/21/2016 8:44:00 AM
A delightful, creative haiku containing the right ingredients, David! Very worthy of this podium finish! Congratulations!! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/21/2016 12:13:00 AM
Love this! Congrats,David.
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Date: 5/20/2016 8:51:00 PM
Unique and refreshing haiku David! Very deserving of your second place win! Congratulations my friend! #7 ; )
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Date: 5/20/2016 7:55:00 PM
Congrats on a great win David
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Date: 5/20/2016 7:52:00 PM
Delicious! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/20/2016 7:40:00 PM
Congratulations David, well done...
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Date: 5/20/2016 7:17:00 PM
Excellent model of how a haiku ought to be!! The paper umbrella. Awesome! And congrats.
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