Summer Haiku

in strawberry shade pina colada blushing… paper umbrella 16 May 2016

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Sandra Haight

Date: 5/21/2016 3:18:00 PM

Excellent Haiku, David. Congratulations on your nice placement. Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2016 12:04:00 PM

- Congratulations on your Summer poems, David - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/21/2016 8:44:00 AM

A delightful, creative haiku containing the right ingredients, David! Very worthy of this podium finish! Congratulations!! ~ Regards // paul

Susan Palli

Date: 5/21/2016 12:13:00 AM

Love this! Congrats,David.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/20/2016 8:51:00 PM

Unique and refreshing haiku David! Very deserving of your second place win! Congratulations my friend! #7 ; )

Joseph May

Date: 5/20/2016 7:55:00 PM

Congrats on a great win David

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/20/2016 7:52:00 PM

Delicious! Congratulations!

Charlie Smith

Date: 5/20/2016 7:40:00 PM

Congratulations David, well done...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2016 7:17:00 PM

Excellent model of how a haiku ought to be!! The paper umbrella. Awesome! And congrats.