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Summer Haiku

in strawberry shade
pina colada blushing…
    paper umbrella

      16 May 2016

Copyright © David Mohn | Year Posted 2016

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May 21, 2016 at 3:18 PM

Excellent Haiku, David. Congratulations on your nice placement. Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 21, 2016 at 12:04 PM

- Congratulations on your Summer poems, David - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

May 21, 2016 at 8:44 AM

A delightful, creative haiku containing the right ingredients, David! Very worthy of this podium finish! Congratulations!! ~ Regards // paul

May 21, 2016 at 12:13 AM

Love this! Congrats,David.

Connie Marcum Wong

May 20, 2016 at 8:51 PM

Unique and refreshing haiku David! Very deserving of your second place win! Congratulations my friend! #7 ; )

May 20, 2016 at 7:55 PM

Congrats on a great win David

May 20, 2016 at 7:52 PM

Delicious! Congratulations!

May 20, 2016 at 7:40 PM

Congratulations David, well done...

Andrea Dietrich

May 20, 2016 at 7:17 PM

Excellent model of how a haiku ought to be!! The paper umbrella. Awesome! And congrats.

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