Summer Haiku

drinking lemonade
colored picturesque glade;
dosing under shade


Date:16.5.2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Andresen Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 12:10 PM
- Congratulations on your Summer poems, Mohan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 7:36 PM
Loved the first two lines and how they rhymed. Line three just did not make sense to me! Thanks for supporting my contest and congrats on HM
Callus Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 7:50 AM
An enjoyable summer siesta, Mohan! I love the image which you create. gl in the contest. ~ Regards // paul
Smith Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 9:56 AM
Sounds like a beautiful day...I could go for a nap under the shade tree...excellent images
Gazbowski Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 6:41 AM
very nice :-)
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