Summer Haiku

summer heat
a lemonade glass
cools noon sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Haight Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 3:26 PM
Excellent Haiku, Teddy. Congratulations on your nice placement. Sandra
Kimathi Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 4:03 PM
Thank you so much for your applause, Sandra!! *^_^*
Andresen Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 12:18 PM
- Congratulations on your Summer poems, Teddy - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kimathi Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 4:01 PM
Hi Anne Lise. Thanks so much for your applause!! *^_^*
Flower Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 9:43 PM
Congrats on your placement, Teddy.
Kimathi Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 11:37 AM
Thank you so much for your applause, Moon!! *^_^*
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 7:28 PM
short and sweet as lemonade. Congrats in my contest, Teddy
Kimathi Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 11:36 AM
Lol, and for a long time I haven't taken it..... Thanks for your applause in your sweet contest, Andrea!! *^_^*
Devnath  Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 9:48 AM
Excellent way to have relaxation from heat of sun. Beautifully done my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Kimathi Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 11:36 AM
Thank you so much for enjoying my piece, BL!! ;-)
Adebayo Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 11:07 AM
Awesome write
Kimathi Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 5:29 PM
Thank you so much Opeyemi!! :-)
Gazbowski Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 12:07 PM
nice three lines Teddy.
Kimathi Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 2:49 AM
Thank you Lenny!! ;-)
Andresen Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 11:57 AM
- Sounds cool, Teddy - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kimathi Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 2:48 AM
Glad to hear from you after a while!! Thanks Anne Lise, for enjoying my piece!! ;-)
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