Summer Fun

A warm summer sun
one eyed dog yawn’s and stretches—
Old man starts snoring
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Allison Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 1:17 AM
The imagery of the man and dog sure made me smile Jerry:-) hugs jan xx
Rolland Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 5:36 PM
deleicious haiku, si descripive and presennt, very enjoyable yann
Wolf Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 7:12 PM
Sounds just right, Jerry. Time to lean back in my hammock --- and try not to fall out! :) gw
Lawless Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 5:27 AM
a perfect pair...
Greenhough Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 4:32 PM
The heat of summer is very relaxing. This is a good haiku tribute.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 3:31 PM
Hello Jerry Brotherton, I now have this image in my mind. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
One Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 12:54 PM
You painted the picture really well Jerry..
Gifford Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 7:14 AM
Beautiful way to spend a summer’s day, Jerry. Enjoy your day, my friend.
M  Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 5:33 AM
You make me laugh Brother Jerry!! Is it supposed to be one eyed old man starts snoring haha! Debx
Cunningham Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 5:00 AM
Love the image Jerry, when it's like that all you want to do is nap, thank God for retirement Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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