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Summer Fun

A warm summer sun one eyed dog yawn’s and stretches— Old man starts snoring

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/29/2024 1:17:00 AM

The imagery of the man and dog sure made me smile Jerry:-) hugs jan xx

Yann Rolland

Date: 6/28/2024 5:36:00 PM

deleicious haiku, si descripive and presennt, very enjoyable yann

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/26/2024 7:12:00 PM

Sounds just right, Jerry. Time to lean back in my hammock --- and try not to fall out! :) gw

John Lawless

Date: 6/21/2024 5:27:00 AM

a perfect pair...

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/20/2024 4:32:00 PM

The heat of summer is very relaxing. This is a good haiku tribute.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/20/2024 3:31:00 PM

Hello Jerry Brotherton, I now have this image in my mind. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/

Silent One

Date: 6/20/2024 12:54:00 PM

You painted the picture really well Jerry..

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 6/20/2024 7:14:00 AM

Beautiful way to spend a summer’s day, Jerry. Enjoy your day, my friend.

Deb M

Date: 6/20/2024 5:33:00 AM

You make me laugh Brother Jerry!! Is it supposed to be one eyed old man starts snoring haha! Debx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/20/2024 5:00:00 AM

Love the image Jerry, when it's like that all you want to do is nap, thank God for retirement Hope you're keeping well. Tom