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Mirror Sestet
A six lined (eight syllable per line) rhymed poem.
The first word of line 1 rhymes with the last word of line 1.The first word of line 2 is the last word of line 1 and the last word of line 2 is the 1st word of line 1.
The first word of line 3 rhymes with the last word of line 3.
The first word of line 4 is the last word of line 3 and the
last word of line 4 is the 1st word of line 3.
The first word of line 5 rhymes with the last word of line 5.
The first word of line 6 is the last word of line 5 and the
last word of line 6 is the 1st word of line 5.

Sunshine feels tangibly divine divine basking in the sunshine. Beguiled flowers favor the wild wild roses enchant the beguiled. Tents and backyard barbecue scents scents that recall sleeping in tents. Laughs over childish children's gaffes gaffes are accompanied by laughs. Splits sprinkled with sugary bits bits enhance the flavor of splits. Fun times inspiring youth to run run and enjoy summertime fun. (Mirror Sestet) 08,05,2019

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Date: 8/5/2019 4:22:00 PM
Nicely done!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/6/2019 9:08:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your support friend, Emile.
Date: 8/5/2019 1:18:00 PM
It seems like a complicated form to me, but I like your poem! A light, cheerful look at summer. Blessings, Kim
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/5/2019 2:57:00 PM
Thanks Kim, it is quite challenging..but that's what makes it fun, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile

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