JC Brul Poet Footle

Summer Footles

bright sun
more fun

green trees
fresh breeze

folks sing
and swing

kids scream
ice-cream 

and me?
I see~

fresh start
new art


26.05.2021


All Yours ( May 27) Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand
1st place

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Andrea Dietrich May 30, 2021 at 2:03 PM I love this. If it's in a contest still going, I am sure it's going to be a winner!

Mystic Rose Rose May 29, 2021 at 3:01 PM I love fresh starts and I love ice cream in the summer time dear J.C. May you have a happy season full of ice cream and fresh new starts. :)

Anitha Jayasankar May 28, 2021 at 7:38 PM Beautiful footles rhyming well dear JCB... 'fresh start, new art'... loved it... God bless... Hugs.. ~ Ani JC Brul May 28, 2021 at 9:42 PM Thank you dear Anitha! Blessings!

Kim Merryman May 28, 2021 at 3:53 PM Back to say congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M JC Brul May 28, 2021 at 9:42 PM Thank you Kim..You are an inspiration!

Juliet Ligon May 26, 2021 at 7:44 AM I love those last two lines. JC Brul May 28, 2021 at 9:42 PM thank you Juliet..Your poems are amazing! Looking forward to read more!

Alexis Y. May 25, 2021 at 9:08 PM Hi JBC, You have penned a well-written “ string” of summer footles. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis JC Brul May 25, 2021 at 9:30 PM Thank you Alexis! Happy Summer!

Kim Merryman May 25, 2021 at 7:05 PM Great summer footles, JCB! Kids aren't the only ones who scream for ice cream (me,me,me) Blessings, Kim M JC Brul May 25, 2021 at 9:29 PM haha, me too Kim! Thank you for dropping by! Happy summer!!