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Summer Flowers

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Written: May 10, 2024, For Jay Narain Summer Contest Rumi Quote: Raise your words, not voice. It is rain that grows flowers, not thunder
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Flowers grow in the warm touch of summer, Jasmine and gardenias smell strummer. A seductive scent pervades the space, An illustration of passion transcends interlace. Sunflower view chases a sun's dazzling pathway, Pansies proceeds with colors in a bright display. Lavender-purple petals—are a soothing sight, Attracting bees and birds, a whimsical flight. Orchid's elegance is a squint to grasp, Ginger and heliconia—stories yet unclasp. Hawaiian blooms, with exotic grace, Beckon us to relish their vibrant embrace. A vivid show of marigolds and birds of paradise, Hibiscus blooms—giving it a divine melodize. Chrysanthemums, daisies, and dahlias are bright, It's a tapestry of colors—a celestial sight. Flowers paint our path from heaven to earth, It is a symphony of beauty—a gift from birth. Petunias, as elegant as they seem, Butterflies flutter—drawn to their gleam. Cherish summer, with this floral display, Where summer's embrace holds us sway. Its beauty inspires,— its fragrance delights, As we bask in nature's wondrous sights.
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Date: 5/12/2024 3:47:00 PM
SP. The descriptions are apt and wonderful. We have to love flowers and watching them form. The scents are also a pleasure as you point out!
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Date: 5/11/2024 3:38:00 PM
Your poem is a delightful ode to the beauty and splendour of summer flowers, painting a vivid picture of nature's bounty in full bloom. The rich imagery and descriptive language bring to life the colours, scents, and textures of the floral kingdom, inviting readers to immerse themselves in a sensory feast. From the seductive scent of jasmine and gardenias to the whimsical flight of bees and birds attracted to lavender-purple petals, each stanza unfolds like beautiful of natural wonders.
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Date: 5/11/2024 9:37:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your beautiful "Summer Flowers" write. What a pretty picture to go with this lovely write. Summer/gardens/flowers go together. Wish I was there....  "Good Luck" Have A Blessed Weekend Writing Away.........
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Date: 5/11/2024 8:43:00 AM
I felt the comeraderie of flowers as I read this poem. Each flower was crafted with it's own personality amongst the others. Goodluck with the contest.
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Date: 5/11/2024 5:30:00 AM
Delightfully roaming with the glee and exuberance of summer flowers. A pleasure to read, my friend. A symphony of colors throughout!
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Date: 5/11/2024 2:14:00 AM
I felt like i Iv walked through a summer garden so fragrant and vibrant with colorful petals blooming in elegance! As i read your words so beautifully articulated in the most artistic manner dr sotto! I love so many lines in this! The vivid descriptions and also the way youv used so many different flowers from orchid elegance to jasmines and roses as well as daisies and dahlias! Your use of poetic techniques here really is impeccable along with your captivating rhymes! A fave this is for me! BOL
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