Summer Flies

swishing tails
snorts and shaking manes -
siesta's plague
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 9:10 PM
this one was a bit humorous and different than the others. Nice job, DAvid, and congrats in my contest.
De La Croes Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 2:09 AM
Thank you for your kind consideration of my entry, Andrea, and also for the contest. Be well, David
Callus Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 3:01 PM
Quite unique and creative take on this summer topic, David. I can relate to this...we had a horse on the farm, luckily he was very patient! Congrats on this fine win. Regards // paul
De La Croes Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 2:08 AM
Thank you, Paul! I thought I try something different. Congratulations on your placing as well! David
Ficklin Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 10:18 AM
If you have ever seen a horse on a hot summer day trying to get some sleep there are sure to be a million flies pestering :) - nice one.. congrats on your win!
De La Croes Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 2:06 AM
Thank you, Lukas! Congratulations on your poems on the ants, as well. David
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