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Summer Flies

swishing tails snorts and shaking manes - siesta's plague

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2016 9:10:00 PM

this one was a bit humorous and different than the others. Nice job, DAvid, and congrats in my contest.

David De La Croes
Date: 5/30/2016 2:09:00 AM

Thank you for your kind consideration of my entry, Andrea, and also for the contest. Be well, David

Paul Callus

Date: 5/27/2016 3:01:00 PM

Quite unique and creative take on this summer topic, David. I can relate to this...we had a horse on the farm, luckily he was very patient! Congrats on this fine win. Regards // paul

David De La Croes
Date: 5/30/2016 2:08:00 AM

Thank you, Paul! I thought I try something different. Congratulations on your placing as well! David

Lukas Ficklin

Date: 5/27/2016 10:18:00 AM

If you have ever seen a horse on a hot summer day trying to get some sleep there are sure to be a million flies pestering :) - nice one.. congrats on your win!

David De La Croes
Date: 5/30/2016 2:06:00 AM

Thank you, Lukas! Congratulations on your poems on the ants, as well. David