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Summer Ensemble

. Breezes orchestrate Windchimes melodius sounds Music fills the air

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/9/2009 5:35:00 AM
I really love this one. Thanks for writing it. Sara
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Date: 7/1/2009 9:00:00 PM
A well written haiku. great job laurie!
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Date: 5/19/2009 1:13:00 PM
Give me an "rrrrrrrrr" LOL orchestrate..lovely
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Date: 5/13/2009 9:02:00 PM
Like this one alot.
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Date: 5/11/2009 9:56:00 AM
Prettiest haiku so far.
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Date: 5/10/2009 5:15:00 AM
Dear Laurie, Great Haiku LOVE ALWAYS...HG Soup Mail Call
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Date: 5/10/2009 12:31:00 AM
And complements you words so well Laurie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 5/9/2009 8:26:00 PM
Very beautiful short poem. The sound fills the whole soupland. Thanks for sharing and thank you for the warm comment on my write. Ernilando
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Date: 5/9/2009 6:18:00 PM
oh the sweet sound of wind-chimes! sounds like a haiku written with delight! and thanks for your comments! Laurie, you are very sweet...Jim
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Date: 5/8/2009 8:44:00 AM
short and beautiful. have a great day.
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Date: 5/7/2009 4:42:00 PM
As welcome as a summer breeze, you offer the reader a breath of fresh air that evokes a beautiful melody, Laurie. Excellent work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/7/2009 2:06:00 PM
Laurie, this is music to my eyes : ). Absolutely gorgeous. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/7/2009 12:54:00 PM
I love the whole thing, it's heading to my favorites. Great job...Raul
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Date: 5/7/2009 12:24:00 PM
Got me smiling with this one. Nice use of imagery. Good job! Karen
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Date: 5/7/2009 11:09:00 AM
Dear SIS, Great Haiku LOVE YOU...HG Soup Mail Call Again
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Date: 5/7/2009 10:34:00 AM
This is beautiful writing my friend.. the breeze playing a melody...nice work.
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Date: 5/7/2009 9:44:00 AM
IT'S A THRILLING HAIKU.
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Date: 5/7/2009 9:35:00 AM
Dear Laurie, This Haiku brings music to the ears Beautifully Composed LOVE ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 5/7/2009 9:08:00 AM
Like ...Windchimes melodius sounds ... your talent chimes a wind refreshing for my read. Love
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Date: 5/7/2009 9:07:00 AM
....Smile, I love windchimes~the wind is always stirring where I live~and they are 'always' playing their mesmerizing melodies~kind of like most or "Your" writes dear lady!!!!:):)~Beautiful Poem Laurie"~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves,' Forever, John!!!"~"Have A Very Gorgeous & Beautiful Day Dear Lady!!!!:):) Bye ~
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Date: 5/7/2009 9:01:00 AM
Smile~There "You" go again~being soo gentle and soft!!!!:):)~Why are "You" so, "Enchantingly Beautiful!!!?":):)~Smile, "Goodmorning Precious, Priceless & Beautiful Laurie Ginn!!!!":):)~I sincerely hope that "You" have been doing wonderfully dear lady~from the loveliness of this beautiful Haiku~it seems as though hopefully "You" are!!!!?:):)....cont....
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Date: 5/7/2009 8:41:00 AM
Laurie if you love wind chimes, you would love my place. They are a blessing to me. Soothing sounds that always seem to relax. God Bless, Ron
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Date: 5/7/2009 7:10:00 AM
It's messing up my hair!!! (The music's nice, however!)
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Date: 5/7/2009 7:00:00 AM
Yes, I see the orchestra assembled with all th einstruments of nature ... and feel your write.
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