Summer Ensemble

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                                                   Breezes orchestrate

                                           Windchimes melodius sounds

                                                    Music fills the air
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Kendrick Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 5:35 AM
I really love this one. Thanks for writing it. Sara
Lopez Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 9:00 PM
A well written haiku. great job laurie!
Guzzi Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 1:13 PM
Give me an "rrrrrrrrr" LOL orchestrate..lovely
Neshat Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 9:02 PM
Like this one alot.
Shahwan Avatar
May 11, 2009 at 9:56 AM
Prettiest haiku so far.
Esquire Avatar
May 10, 2009 at 5:15 AM
Dear Laurie, Great Haiku LOVE ALWAYS...HG Soup Mail Call
Strand Avatar
May 10, 2009 at 12:31 AM
And complements you words so well Laurie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Tugaff Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 8:26 PM
Very beautiful short poem. The sound fills the whole soupland. Thanks for sharing and thank you for the warm comment on my write. Ernilando
Goff Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 6:18 PM
oh the sweet sound of wind-chimes! sounds like a haiku written with delight! and thanks for your comments! Laurie, you are very sweet...Jim
Burton Avatar
May 8, 2009 at 8:44 AM
short and beautiful. have a great day.
Devonshire Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 4:42 PM
As welcome as a summer breeze, you offer the reader a breath of fresh air that evokes a beautiful melody, Laurie. Excellent work! Love, Carolyn
Winter Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 2:06 PM
Laurie, this is music to my eyes : ). Absolutely gorgeous. Love, Shar
Moreno Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 12:54 PM
I love the whole thing, it's heading to my favorites. Great job...Raul
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May 7, 2009 at 12:24 PM
Got me smiling with this one. Nice use of imagery. Good job! Karen
Esquire Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 11:09 AM
Dear SIS, Great Haiku LOVE YOU...HG Soup Mail Call Again
Higgins Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 10:34 AM
This is beautiful writing my friend.. the breeze playing a melody...nice work.
Shahwan Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 9:44 AM
IT'S A THRILLING HAIKU.
Esquire Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 9:35 AM
Dear Laurie, This Haiku brings music to the ears Beautifully Composed LOVE ALWAYS...HG
Smalling Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 9:08 AM
Like ...Windchimes melodius sounds ... your talent chimes a wind refreshing for my read. Love
Rhinem Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 9:07 AM
....Smile, I love windchimes~the wind is always stirring where I live~and they are 'always' playing their mesmerizing melodies~kind of like most or "Your" writes dear lady!!!!:):)~Beautiful Poem Laurie"~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves,' Forever, John!!!"~"Have A Very Gorgeous & Beautiful Day Dear Lady!!!!:):) Bye ~
Rhinem Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 9:01 AM
Smile~There "You" go again~being soo gentle and soft!!!!:):)~Why are "You" so, "Enchantingly Beautiful!!!?":):)~Smile, "Goodmorning Precious, Priceless & Beautiful Laurie Ginn!!!!":):)~I sincerely hope that "You" have been doing wonderfully dear lady~from the loveliness of this beautiful Haiku~it seems as though hopefully "You" are!!!!?:):)....cont....
Bingham Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 8:41 AM
Laurie if you love wind chimes, you would love my place. They are a blessing to me. Soothing sounds that always seem to relax. God Bless, Ron
Richards Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 7:10 AM
It's messing up my hair!!! (The music's nice, however!)
Shango Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 7:00 AM
Yes, I see the orchestra assembled with all th einstruments of nature ... and feel your write.
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