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Summer Ensemble

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                                                   Breezes orchestrate

                                           Windchimes melodius sounds

                                                    Music fills the air

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/9/2009 5:35:00 AM

I really love this one. Thanks for writing it. Sara

Abe Lopez

Date: 7/1/2009 9:00:00 PM

A well written haiku. great job laurie!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/19/2009 1:13:00 PM

Give me an "rrrrrrrrr" LOL orchestrate..lovely

Shirin Neshat

Date: 5/13/2009 9:02:00 PM

Like this one alot.

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 5/11/2009 9:56:00 AM

Prettiest haiku so far.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 5/10/2009 5:15:00 AM

Dear Laurie, Great Haiku LOVE ALWAYS...HG Soup Mail Call

Brian Strand

Date: 5/10/2009 12:31:00 AM

And complements you words so well Laurie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 5/9/2009 8:26:00 PM

Very beautiful short poem. The sound fills the whole soupland. Thanks for sharing and thank you for the warm comment on my write. Ernilando

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/9/2009 6:18:00 PM

oh the sweet sound of wind-chimes! sounds like a haiku written with delight! and thanks for your comments! Laurie, you are very sweet...Jim

Derrick Burton

Date: 5/8/2009 8:44:00 AM

short and beautiful. have a great day.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/7/2009 4:42:00 PM

As welcome as a summer breeze, you offer the reader a breath of fresh air that evokes a beautiful melody, Laurie. Excellent work! Love, Carolyn

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/7/2009 2:06:00 PM

Laurie, this is music to my eyes : ). Absolutely gorgeous. Love, Shar

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/7/2009 12:54:00 PM

I love the whole thing, it's heading to my favorites. Great job...Raul

Date: 5/7/2009 12:24:00 PM

Got me smiling with this one. Nice use of imagery. Good job! Karen

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 5/7/2009 11:09:00 AM

Dear SIS, Great Haiku LOVE YOU...HG Soup Mail Call Again

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/7/2009 10:34:00 AM

This is beautiful writing my friend.. the breeze playing a melody...nice work.

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 5/7/2009 9:44:00 AM

IT'S A THRILLING HAIKU.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 5/7/2009 9:35:00 AM

Dear Laurie, This Haiku brings music to the ears Beautifully Composed LOVE ALWAYS...HG

David Smalling

Date: 5/7/2009 9:08:00 AM

Like ...Windchimes melodius sounds ... your talent chimes a wind refreshing for my read. Love

John Rhinem

Date: 5/7/2009 9:07:00 AM

....Smile, I love windchimes~the wind is always stirring where I live~and they are 'always' playing their mesmerizing melodies~kind of like most or "Your" writes dear lady!!!!:):)~Beautiful Poem Laurie"~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves,' Forever, John!!!"~"Have A Very Gorgeous & Beautiful Day Dear Lady!!!!:):) Bye ~

John Rhinem

Date: 5/7/2009 9:01:00 AM

Smile~There "You" go again~being soo gentle and soft!!!!:):)~Why are "You" so, "Enchantingly Beautiful!!!?":):)~Smile, "Goodmorning Precious, Priceless & Beautiful Laurie Ginn!!!!":):)~I sincerely hope that "You" have been doing wonderfully dear lady~from the loveliness of this beautiful Haiku~it seems as though hopefully "You" are!!!!?:):)....cont....