Summer Daze

Lazily musing on the bank of a gently flowing stream, 
I mulled upon life: was it reality or naught but a dream? 
Then at the moment I pondered, what and why? 
I heard a musical chorus from somewhere nearby. 

Though immersed in reverie, I became aware, 
it was Nature, I could hear borne upon the air.
Firstly the drumming, of a Woodpecker’s tattoo,
aroused me to ask of myself - what, where and who, 

chose this peaceful, summer afternoon to play
harmonic rhapsodies, on this warm summer's day?
Next came the low humming of swarming bees
seeking a new home, in the overhanging trees. 

With low-key droning, they enhanced the melody,
and provided basic fundamentals, to the rhapsody. 
When a flock of songbirds, added their melodious tune,
I knew I was favoured by nature, that afternoon! 

When frogs in chorus added their courting song,
to join Blue Jays shrilling, I knew it would not be long
before others would arrive to add their melodic call 
to bestow talents, which would be welcomed by all. 

Next Mourning Doves, singing of love in a soft duet, 
gave cause to wonder, if perhaps I'd hear a minuet? 
At this moment Skylarks, performing an aerial ballet,
reached new heights, in a brilliant, aerobatic, display! 

This latest addition to the fast growing choral group
was the ultimate perfection. As members of the troupe 
continued unabated, suddenly a clap of thunder heard,
brought the chorus to an end, and every beast, bird, 

bee, insect and even the breeze was stayed!
As they all left, I was saddened and dismayed,
for Nature's orchestra that I had heard this day, 
was possessed of talents, seldom heard this way.

It left me wondering if it had been a dream, 
that I had enjoyed as I dozed by the stream?
But further thought was cut short, as the hush
was a reminder rain approached. So left in a rush! 

Rhymer 26th August, 2016.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/31/2016 9:37:00 PM
Hi Denis, this is an amazingly descriptive and eloquently written piece. Very much enjoyed. So glad I found you for an unexpected treat as I near the bottom of the soup bowl. Here's hoping for a good long chew!
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Date: 9/1/2016 8:32:00 AM
Hi Jeannie, nice to meet you (figuratively speaking), and thanks greatly for your comment.. Did a quick browse of your poetry late yesterday and have intentions of returning to comment later. A fan and user of rhyme. Gardening has priority when the weather allows. Large garden - a few pictures on my web site if you're interested? Fondest regards. Ciao Denis.
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