Summer Days

Colorful umbrellas dot the shore As beachgoers bask in sunshine Sandcastles threatened by waves People collect seashells As the ocean roars There's fun and sun On sizzling Summer Days 5-123-2024

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/17/2024 12:33:00 PM

Oh the delight of the beach in the summer and all of the simple pleasures like hunting for seashells, building sandcastles and just watching the movement of the earth in the tides. What a wonderful, simple poetic form that expresses these simple delights, Joseph! Thanks for these lovely moments! Blessings.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/15/2024 6:54:00 PM

I like the ' colorful umbrellas ' of summer, and collecting ' seashells ' on the seashore. :) Your thoughts take me there, Joseph. My heart is smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2024 10:41:00 PM

Oh this so excellently describes my feelings on summer days. Love the beach!

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/13/2024 5:07:00 PM

The essence of your poetry, Joseph, revolves around enjoyment and the radiant warmth of summer days. I truly enjoy the excitement you convey for the season.

Silent One

Date: 5/13/2024 12:26:00 PM

You described summer days really well Joseph..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/13/2024 6:42:00 AM

Fun and the sun in summer days---true and the essence of your poem, Joseph. Much enjoyed the revelry of the season you convey.

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 5/13/2024 1:36:00 AM

Excellent nonet. Summer is here and I'm already sweating plus the jellyfish.