Summer Days

 Colorful umbrellas dot the shore
 As beachgoers bask in sunshine
 Sandcastles threatened by waves
 People collect seashells
 As the ocean roars
 There's fun and sun
 On sizzling
 Summer
 Days

 5-123-2024

oceansummernonet

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Sam Kauffman

May 17, 2024 at 12:33 PM

Oh the delight of the beach in the summer and all of the simple pleasures like hunting for seashells, building sandcastles and just watching the movement of the earth in the tides. What a wonderful, simple poetic form that expresses these simple delights, Joseph! Thanks for these lovely moments! Blessings.

Brandy Nicole

May 15, 2024 at 6:54 PM

I like the ' colorful umbrellas ' of summer, and collecting ' seashells ' on the seashore. :) Your thoughts take me there, Joseph. My heart is smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

May 14, 2024 at 10:41 PM

Oh this so excellently describes my feelings on summer days. Love the beach!

Sotto Poet

May 13, 2024 at 5:07 PM

The essence of your poetry, Joseph, revolves around enjoyment and the radiant warmth of summer days. I truly enjoy the excitement you convey for the season.