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Summer Days

Lay me down,                  
                                                                 in the month of May

                                     let me watch the hummingbirds play,
                   lilacs softly bloom . . .


                                                             Hold me,
                                  in the aroma of honeysuckles
                    and baby blue skies


      While my eyes
  bask in the elegance


                           Of 
           . . . Summer days



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   Just a little Scribble 
   ~ Sweet Moments ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 4/13/2024 10:23:00 AM
Pretty poem Brandy
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/13/2024 7:16:00 PM
Awe, thank you David. Summer is a sensational season. I'm looking forward to the warm sunshine. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Date: 10/14/2020 9:22:00 PM
Great stuff! I tend to write for some reason mostly love poems. I found myself thinking about laying in the green grass looking up at the clouds. I also wanted to let you know that I am a fan of your work. Check out some of my stuff you might enjoy it! Enjoy your day
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/15/2020 7:46:00 PM
Hi Matt, it's nice to meet you here. I had no idea that you were a fan of my work. Thank you for your lovely comment. Love is a wonderful emotion to write about. I will check out your poetry. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 10/3/2020 8:24:00 PM
Wonderful poem
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/3/2020 8:59:00 PM
Thank you Robert. Summer, is one of my favorite seasons. :) Brandy
Date: 9/9/2020 4:46:00 AM
very sweet indeed! Your words are very beautiful and calming. Great work!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/9/2020 12:02:00 PM
So kind of you to say. Thank you Mark. Summer is a sensational season. :) Brandy
Date: 6/9/2020 4:48:00 PM
Soft and beautiful like a summer breeze, Brandy! Your poems remind me of Charmaine Chircop's writing, very thoughtful and romantic. I enjoyed reading this today...hugs, Rhonda xx
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/9/2020 8:33:00 PM
Dear Rhonda, thank you for your lovely comment and compliment. I have had the chance of reading a few of Charmaine's poetic whispers. She is a very talented writer. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy
Date: 5/18/2020 5:24:00 AM
This poem enchants Brandy! I enjoyed your lovely imagery. Blessings xxoo
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/18/2020 2:59:00 PM
Thank you Connie. : ) Such a wonderful thing to say. Your thoughts bring a smile. I appreciate you. : ) Brandy
Date: 5/17/2020 10:51:00 PM
Almost all the senses are brought to life in this wonderful write. Enjoyed reading Brandy.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/18/2020 2:57:00 PM
Hi Michael, so kind of you to read this little scribble of mine. Yes, many of the senses dance along the page. I appreciate you and your thoughts. : ) Brandy
Date: 5/13/2020 10:32:00 PM
Brandy - first of all, I love reading poetry right to left, second of all, you hit on some real highlights of summer to me, and third of all, I've missed reading your musings. Great to see your words splashed across the page, wafting in positive thoughts. Blessings my friend ~ John
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/13/2020 11:24:00 PM
John, thank you for all your kind words and compliments. Your thoughts bring a smile. : ) My words like to caress the page in so many different ways. So kind of you to notice. Yes, it is about that time of year. Summertime. I appreciate you and your wonderful comment. : ) Hugs and blessings, Brandy
Date: 5/10/2020 10:35:00 PM
You have a way with words. I also like your formatting and accompanying picture. Hugs Rick.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/10/2020 10:52:00 PM
Your thoughts bring a smile and make me blush. Thank you Rick. : ) Brandy
Date: 5/10/2020 11:04:00 AM
Sounds lovely... hope the weather stays nice so you can lay and watch the beauty before you...
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/10/2020 6:53:00 PM
Beautiful Spring like weather lingers here. : ) I am lovin' it. Thank you Silent One. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy
Date: 5/9/2020 2:42:00 PM
My eyes basked in elegance while reading this dear Brandy, well penned.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/9/2020 8:15:00 PM
Hi Pixie. : ) Your thoughts bring a smile. I appreciate you and your kindness. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 5/9/2020 7:02:00 AM
Simply beautiful and I so love it.. God bless you dear friend. Love to you, Gina
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/9/2020 8:13:00 PM
Thank you Regina. So sweet of you to say. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs and Love, Brandy
Date: 5/9/2020 1:56:00 AM
Looks like you got your muse back ... wonderful. There's just something really easy and enchanting about your pieces. Really not a ton of words going on here ... but your formatting causes me to read it slower and thus I experience the words more fully. Much enjoyed.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/9/2020 8:11:00 PM
: ) My muse seems to be lingering in the clouds. Must be why my words float along the page, as they do. (Smiling Softly) Your thoughts are appreciated. Thank you Timothy. Reading slow to experience the moment. I do that sometimes. :) Brandy
Date: 5/9/2020 1:40:00 AM
This has an irresistibly warm glow, Belle. A very inviting little scribble.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/9/2020 8:05:00 PM
Thank you Lawrence. Warmth of the Season, truly is inviting. You and your thoughts are appreciated. : ) Brandy
Date: 5/7/2020 1:32:00 PM
The wonderful thing about Brandy is that it instantly warm one's heart! Aloha! Rico
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/7/2020 9:37:00 PM
I am blushing. Your thoughts leave me almost speechless. Thank you Rico. My heart is touched by your kind words. :) Brandy
Date: 5/7/2020 12:24:00 PM
Such beautiful thoughts and beautiful imagery, Brandy, the love within your heart beams in your poetry. Stay safe my sweet friend. Hugs, John
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/7/2020 8:39:00 PM
Love truly overflows from my heart. Your thoughts are so beautiful and tender. Such a wonderful thing to say to me. Thank you John. I appreciate you and your kind words. :) Brandy
Date: 5/7/2020 7:37:00 AM
Lost in the fragrance of summer, as hummingbirds dart by, Wonderful write Brandy..
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/7/2020 7:28:00 PM
Yes, and I am just letting that aroma softly caress around moments. It is such a beautiful time of year. Thank you Joseph. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy
Date: 5/7/2020 6:04:00 AM
As delicate as the lovely spring flowers--and delightful as the music of birds--and scented in nature--charming poetic words, Brandy. Beautifully done.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/7/2020 6:55:00 PM
Your thoughts are so sweet and poetic. :) I am smiling and drifting in the tenderness of the season. Thank you Vijay. Your kind words are appreciated. :) Brandy
Date: 5/6/2020 10:53:00 PM
Wonderfully written, Brandy!
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/7/2020 6:52:00 PM
Thank you Kim. You and your kind words are appreciated. :) Brandy
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