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Summer Days

The summer days were hot, We cooked crabs in the big metal pot. Then baking the best creamy chocolate cupcakes, With tons of wonderful coconut flakes. Off to the park to eat we must go, Oh please do not say no. I long for the days of old, The days when we could both be bold. The days when my Aunt, Was hugged and told. I love you forever and ever, That could have knocked her over like a heavenly feather. 7/8/2019

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/10/2024 10:27:00 AM

You say much in this lovely poem! First line is perfect! Yummy food, not ordinary but descriptive! I can savor it from here! And then don’t say no to looking back, going to a perfect place…a perfect memory! Glad I found this one! Fave!

Euni- verse

Date: 7/17/2019 12:51:00 AM

Hi Paula! After reading all your poems, I see that you do love writing free verse poems; and I loved each and every one of them. You have a clever way with words and I hope you are enjoying yourself in this community. Explore the site 'cause there's a lot to learn here (maybe even explore other forms of poetry you may want to try your hand on). Looking forward to reading your future works :D

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2019 10:51:00 AM

Thank You, for reading & writing back to me. I am enjoying being in the Soup bowl with other writers. I look forward to learning as time goes by. Again, Thanks, Paula

Ann Foster

Date: 7/13/2019 8:58:00 PM

I want to go too. Wonderful write. Excellent fun. Ann

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/14/2019 10:41:00 AM

It was a fun & great time. Thanks for the note.

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/11/2019 7:21:00 AM

Lovely days indeed...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/11/2019 5:58:00 PM

They were the best days. I will always cherish them. Thank You, for your note.