Summer Day

Children playing
Kites flying high
Children laughing
Kites blowing in the wind
A storm is coming
Children are crying
Kites aren’t flying
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 15, 2009 at 8:10 PM
Oh, again with the opposite images @.@ jojojo suddenly everything was drowned in salty cracks @.@ brillian development of the poem, and it had no need to be too extended =D thanks for the experience=D
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July 14, 2009 at 2:26 PM
Nice work Steve Summer day's are great muses...Raul
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