Timothy Mcguire Poet Rhyme

Summer Cooking --- Well Done

Summer cooking on the beach,
Slap the sunblock where I can’t reach,
Baking in this broiling sun,
Ever since the day begun.

I’m roasting alive can’t you tell?
Touch my skin and I’ll scream like hell!
This is more than an alarming tan,
Someone said I’m a lobster man.

Sitting here I continue to broil,
Want some popcorn, just add some oil,
I’m finished now, I’m well done,
Cooking here in the summer sun.

6/29/18

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Jan Allison July 28, 2018 at 12:59 PM what a fun poem and a great take on the 'cooking theme', thanks for making me smile Timothy:-) hugs Jan xx Timothy Mcguire July 29, 2018 at 5:08 PM I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks Jan

Darlene De Beaulieu July 26, 2018 at 5:38 PM Hello Timothy Mc Guire, you need sunscreen on your body. or you wil suffer from a bad sunburn. Have a nice evening my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu July 28, 2018 at 2:59 PM Oh so ..very clever. Timothy Mcguire July 27, 2018 at 2:44 AM You are right! Back when I was young people put oil on their skin to tan deeper. That gave me the idea to add popcorn. :)

Susan Gentry July 21, 2018 at 4:32 PM Lol Very good take on the summer cooking theme. Clever and funny. Well done! :) Timothy Mcguire July 23, 2018 at 3:41 PM Thank you Susan!

Line Gauthier July 21, 2018 at 7:36 AM Back with congrats on your top win, Timothy. Well done - pardon the pun. Timothy Mcguire July 23, 2018 at 3:40 PM But not overdone I hope! :) Thanks Line.

Roy Pett July 20, 2018 at 8:20 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Timothy with your well written and humorous poem, really enjoyed reading this. :)) Timothy Mcguire July 20, 2018 at 3:12 PM Thank you Roy!

Kim Rodrigues July 19, 2018 at 5:55 PM Timothy, I enjoyed where you took this write. Loved the line: Want some popcorn, just add some oil...too funny! Congrats on first place! Hugs...Kim Timothy Mcguire July 19, 2018 at 8:03 PM Thank YOU KIM!

Line Gauthier June 30, 2018 at 5:52 PM LOL. A fun poem, Timothy. Timothy Mcguire July 19, 2018 at 10:13 PM Thank you Line!

Lyric Man June 30, 2018 at 6:34 AM Hey Timothy.. So glad I had the opportunity to read your interesting poem this morning. I'm heading home from a road gig today and won't have this chance again for a while. Happy Weekend! Timothy Mcguire July 19, 2018 at 10:09 PM Thanks buddy. Be safe!