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Summer Camp

Summer Camp

Summer camp's been a win-win, this week made me grin!
What great times we had, going like mad, never sad
met playing croquet the first day of our va-cay
you're the one I had fun with each day in the sun
played awesome sports in shorts, laughed through games of all sorts
what jokes we'd make sitting by the lake, sun would bake
we swam every day at the dam, then had to scram
off to canoe, whistle blew, I'd eat lunch with you
goodbye my sweetie pie, our time has just flown by
your kiss felt right late last night. Don't forget to write!


written 17 Aug 2020

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Beata Agustin September 15, 2020 at 1:43 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me yearn for summer camps of great refreshing moments. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you. John Watt September 15, 2020 at 9:02 AM Thank you for the wonderful visit, Beata. I trust all is well with you ~ John

Susan Woodrow September 14, 2020 at 9:33 PM your write has a lightness that seems to skip along with the fun it portrays...love the camping theme too :) John Watt September 14, 2020 at 10:48 PM Thanks, I do enjoy the outdoors a lot. I guess you've noticed that by now, haha!

Funom Makama September 14, 2020 at 5:35 AM A big big congratulations for this feat. I am so sorry this is coming a month late, due to the pressure, we medical practitioners are facing at this time, I didn't have the time to go through the contest, but I am glad I did. it was a difficult decision to make, a big congratulations to you once again. John Watt September 14, 2020 at 7:50 AM Thank you, Funom, for such an intriguing contest and for your kind placement, especially in light of your very busy year. God bless you as you take care of your patients. ~ John

Jennifer Proxenos August 20, 2020 at 9:26 AM What a wonderful pic and an excellent, creative touching poem, a vacation that everyone longs to have with his or her sweetie pie. You wrote this with great poetic skill John. I love it, a fave! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer. John Watt August 20, 2020 at 9:41 AM Thank you for the fave and blessings, my sweet friend! Yes the sweetheart at summer camp is a thread I have not pulled on before, felt it was about time! Hugs ~ John

Andrea Dietrich August 18, 2020 at 4:54 PM you did a phenomenal job at this difficult task. You are a poet wizard now!!! And away I gooooo John Watt August 18, 2020 at 5:45 PM Thank you my friend. You did well also with your cute pie poem.

Jan Allison August 18, 2020 at 4:45 AM aww what a charming poem John such happy memories:-) good luck in the contest i found this form particularly challenging:-) hugs jan xx John Watt August 18, 2020 at 9:20 AM Jan, I'm always happy when my words can charm my charming friend! Yes, totally challenging, I put it off for the same reason. Finally some words fell in place. No call awaits me from the Pulitzer committee, but at least it's an entry, haha!

Tom Cunningham August 18, 2020 at 3:42 AM Happy memories for sure John, I have to ask, did she write? Tom John Watt August 18, 2020 at 9:18 AM Thank you for the kind remark, Tom. I must confess this was a fictional account of a daydream girl, but since it's my daydream - yes, she wrote beautiful love poems to that dreamy boy she met at camp, haha!