Mung Danlahpai Poet Cowboy Poetry

Summer Breeze

Summer Breeze

Summer breeze murmurs
suddently rushes to flowers
Scorching sun
In harvested farm
Cuck-coo-coo-coo
I hear a dove calling
It makes me recall my feeling
Ooh! on this sunny day
"I'm lonely ", I say
Not knowing where to go
Still thinking what to do
Among the kisses of summer breeze
Keep wiping out sweat from my face

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Poet Destroyer A February 28, 2016 at 7:03 AM Mung, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A January 6, 2016 at 12:57 PM Awesome poem

Fisayo Aderounmu July 10, 2013 at 9:04 AM Lovely piece.Welcome on board Mung.

Matthew Anish June 29, 2013 at 10:15 AM Welcome to Poetrysoup! Your poem reminds me of a cowboy song I know. Good beginning to your poetic career at the "soup" Peace & Love Matthew Anish Mung Danlahpai July 1, 2013 at 4:06 AM Really? It's a great coincidence with your song. I didn't purpose to copy from any cowboy songs. It's really my feeling that occurred when I was at farm. Thank you fully for your support and comment.

Richard Lamoureux June 29, 2013 at 12:17 AM This is a good start, I feel the underlying emotion. Mung Danlahpai July 1, 2013 at 3:45 AM Yes, thanks for your comment on my work. I was born in a village. It is really rural far about 50 miles form Urban. My parents are farmers. Our farm is my small world.

Mung Danlahpai June 27, 2013 at 11:44 PM I'm new to poetrysoup and also new to poetry. Here I've written two poems. I do not have so much experiences for writing poems. I'll so grateful to everyone of you if you drop comments on my work.