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Summer Breeze

Summer Breeze Summer breeze murmurs suddently rushes to flowers Scorching sun In harvested farm Cuck-coo-coo-coo I hear a dove calling It makes me recall my feeling Ooh! on this sunny day "I'm lonely ", I say Not knowing where to go Still thinking what to do Among the kisses of summer breeze Keep wiping out sweat from my face

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/28/2016 7:03:00 AM

Mung, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/6/2016 12:57:00 PM

Awesome poem

Fisayo Aderounmu

Date: 7/10/2013 9:04:00 AM

Lovely piece.Welcome on board Mung.

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/29/2013 10:15:00 AM

Welcome to Poetrysoup! Your poem reminds me of a cowboy song I know. Good beginning to your poetic career at the "soup" Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Mung Danlahpai
Date: 7/1/2013 4:06:00 AM

Really? It's a great coincidence with your song. I didn't purpose to copy from any cowboy songs. It's really my feeling that occurred when I was at farm. Thank you fully for your support and comment.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/29/2013 12:17:00 AM

This is a good start, I feel the underlying emotion.

Mung Danlahpai
Date: 7/1/2013 3:45:00 AM

Yes, thanks for your comment on my work. I was born in a village. It is really rural far about 50 miles form Urban. My parents are farmers. Our farm is my small world.

Mung Danlahpai

Date: 6/27/2013 11:44:00 PM

I'm new to poetrysoup and also new to poetry. Here I've written two poems. I do not have so much experiences for writing poems. I'll so grateful to everyone of you if you drop comments on my work.