Summer Breeze

summer breeze clings smothering blanket of heat eyes search clouds for rain

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Cory Long

Date: 7/25/2011 1:02:00 PM

the rain is always a relief in the summer.. Lovely write cory

Ralph Taylor

Date: 7/23/2011 11:46:00 PM

Great haiku, Francine. Awesome. Bring on the rain! Send us some cool air from Canada. Enjoy the rest of the weekend. Thanks for your comments. luv Ralph

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/22/2011 9:03:00 AM

Dear Francine, that smothering blanket of heat must be spread across the entire continent now. In winter we can't wait for spring, but summer can be brutal. Hope you find those rain clouds! And thanks for letting me know my rondelet was off. Really appreciate it and made the correction. Love, Carolyn