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Summer Breeze

summer breeze clings

    smothering blanket of heat

            eyes search clouds for rain

naturehaiku

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Cory Long

July 25, 2011 at 1:02 PM

the rain is always a relief in the summer.. Lovely write cory

Ralph Taylor

July 23, 2011 at 11:46 PM

Great haiku, Francine. Awesome. Bring on the rain! Send us some cool air from Canada. Enjoy the rest of the weekend. Thanks for your comments. luv Ralph

Carolyn Devonshire

July 22, 2011 at 9:03 AM

Dear Francine, that smothering blanket of heat must be spread across the entire continent now. In winter we can't wait for spring, but summer can be brutal. Hope you find those rain clouds! And thanks for letting me know my rondelet was off. Really appreciate it and made the correction. Love, Carolyn

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