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Summer Breeze

Softly the summer breeze
Unburdens me ~
Maybe life will unfold delightfully 
Maybe spitfully,
Even tragically (if true love fails)
Remember me!

Balmy weather makes me remember
Riotous behavior,
Even though I was younger,
Eventually outgrown,
Zephyrs of summer remain perfumed
Ever after.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Peranteau Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 2:59 PM
sweet remembers...(i'll leave it to thuh poets to paint) loved thuh write dear poet ...much love ')
Achara Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 3:56 PM
Thank you.
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