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Softly the summer breeze
Unburdens me ~
Maybe life will unfold delightfully 
Maybe spitfully,
Even tragically (if true love fails)
Remember me!

Balmy weather makes me remember
Riotous behavior,
Even though I was younger,
Eventually outgrown,
Zephyrs of summer remain perfumed
Ever after.

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Date: 8/21/2025 2:59:00 PM
sweet remembers...(i'll leave it to thuh poets to paint) loved thuh write dear poet ...much love ')
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Chetta Achara
Date: 8/21/2025 3:56:00 PM
Thank you.

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