Summer Beach

Shells gleam, sea of glass

Lying on a breast of sand

Seagulls wing the sky
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Ward Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 2:26 PM
A beautiful write. I was right there on the beach. Thank you for your comment on my write.. Jerri
Duffin Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 4:49 AM
Hi M. Another gem. Love the last line ( and the others). Eamon
Parker Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 7:41 AM
I really like the metaphorical phrases (sea of glass, breast of sand, wing the sky)! A nice, descriptive beachscape!
Bagnall Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 5:20 AM
Beautiful imagery, each line on it's own is great, I don't feel the third line is connected to the other two as well as it might have been
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