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Summer Beach

barefoot in the sand
    waves gently lapping the shore -
         a crab scuttles by

6/28/21

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Line Gauthier

July 6, 2021 at 11:48 AM

Charming imagery, Kim ~

Kim Merryman

July 6, 2021 at 7:43 PM

Thank you, Line!

Sam Kauffman

July 5, 2021 at 9:15 AM

Such a delightful summer moment Kim. Congratulations on your win. Blessings of summer to you!

Kim Merryman

July 6, 2021 at 7:43 PM

Thank you, Sam!

Beata Agustin

July 5, 2021 at 6:16 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Kim Merryman

July 6, 2021 at 7:43 PM

Thank you, Beata!

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 4, 2021 at 12:12 PM

- Congratulations on your win ~ enjoy the summer :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

July 6, 2021 at 7:42 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Robert L. Hinshaw

July 4, 2021 at 10:37 AM

I knew yours would be a top winner, Kim! Congrats and thanks for your kind comment re me win. Happy Fourth! Bob

Kim Merryman

July 6, 2021 at 7:41 PM

Thank you, Bob!

Paula Goldsmith

July 3, 2021 at 12:05 PM

Congratulations on your win. I love the beach and this beach write. Have a blessed day/weekend.........................

Kim Merryman

July 6, 2021 at 7:40 PM

Thank you, Paula!

John Lawless

July 3, 2021 at 10:24 AM

be back in a minute....this just carried me to seashore for a brief visit....nicely done Kim

Kim Merryman

July 6, 2021 at 7:40 PM

Thank you, John!

Andrea Dietrich

July 3, 2021 at 10:09 AM

now that is how to do a haiku!! Congrats on your win

Kim Merryman

July 6, 2021 at 7:39 PM

Thank you, Andrea! I really appreciate your encouraging comments.

Christuraj Alex

July 3, 2021 at 9:54 AM

Very Beautiful Hiku. Congratulations to you!

Kim Merryman

July 6, 2021 at 7:39 PM

Thank you, Christuraj!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

July 3, 2021 at 6:19 AM

Mmmm, barefoot in the sand, sounds positively divine! Thoroughly enjoyed this piece! Thank you! Congratulations on your win, xomo!

Kim Merryman

July 6, 2021 at 7:38 PM

Thank you, Maureen! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Tania Kitchin

July 3, 2021 at 4:35 AM

Kim, congratulations on your winning placement, love the last line!

Kim Merryman

July 6, 2021 at 7:38 PM

Thank you so much for my placement, Tania!

Joanna Daniel

June 29, 2021 at 2:02 AM

Brilliant imagery, Kim, I can see it in my mind:)

Kim Merryman

July 2, 2021 at 7:32 PM

Thank you, Jo!

Jan Allison

June 28, 2021 at 10:59 PM

spot on for summer imagery Kim!:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman

July 2, 2021 at 7:32 PM

Thank you, Jan!

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