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Summer Adieu

Once all is revealed the last veil fold
A remorseful quiet falls across the area
The vanished summer ended prematurely
The warm breeze abruptly became cold


Written: October 10, 2022

Bitesize Poem No.53 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Evelyn Judy Buehler October 11, 2022 at 10:28 AM A lovely and bittersweet autumn poem, Lasaad. It is in my faves. Best wishes for the contest.

Demetrios Trifiatis October 11, 2022 at 7:45 AM A glorious goodbye, my friend, Lasaad! Blessings!

Kim Rodrigues October 11, 2022 at 6:28 AM Wow! I really like this, Lasaad, along with the perspective of your picture! Well done, poet!

Vijay Pandit October 11, 2022 at 5:13 AM There is beauty too in this summer's goodbye. Well done my friend.

Victor Buhagiar October 10, 2022 at 11:09 PM Not in Malta. It is only now that we began to have some rain.

Michael Tor October 10, 2022 at 7:38 PM Such a realization here in New York Lasaad we feel it here my friend. How appropriate your words are to read this now... Thank you for posting and sharing..