Summer Adieu

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Once all is revealed the last veil fold A remorseful quiet falls across the area The vanished summer ended prematurely The warm breeze abruptly became cold Written: October 10, 2022 Bitesize Poem No.53 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/11/2022 10:28:00 AM

A lovely and bittersweet autumn poem, Lasaad. It is in my faves. Best wishes for the contest.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/11/2022 7:45:00 AM

A glorious goodbye, my friend, Lasaad! Blessings!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/11/2022 6:28:00 AM

Wow! I really like this, Lasaad, along with the perspective of your picture! Well done, poet!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/11/2022 5:13:00 AM

There is beauty too in this summer's goodbye. Well done my friend.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/10/2022 11:09:00 PM

Not in Malta. It is only now that we began to have some rain.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/10/2022 7:38:00 PM

Such a realization here in New York Lasaad we feel it here my friend. How appropriate your words are to read this now... Thank you for posting and sharing..