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SUMMER his summer mirage heat waves ~ belly dance ~ across the wet steamy street 6/4/2017

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Date: 6/13/2017 7:31:00 PM
I agree with Andrea, that this piece is perfect for summer!! Congrats Kim, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2017 7:46:00 PM
Thanks, Teddy!
Date: 6/8/2017 2:43:00 PM
ohhhh, great imagery this is for summer, Kim. GREAT win. Congrats.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/8/2017 3:33:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 6/7/2017 10:42:00 AM
Congrats on your win , Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2017 11:10:00 AM
Thank you, Sushma!
Date: 6/5/2017 1:00:00 PM
Beautiful picture my lovely friend coloured in haiku. Loved always, bl
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2017 3:55:00 PM
Thank you, BL!
Date: 6/5/2017 11:46:00 AM
Great imagery... Very well done...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2017 3:53:00 PM
Thank you, Supraja!
Date: 6/5/2017 10:18:00 AM
Beautiful imagery in this Kim. It definitely creates a summer feeling for me.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2017 10:59:00 AM
Thanks, Chris!
Date: 6/5/2017 5:15:00 AM
There is fantastic imagery in this little gem Kim! I love it! : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2017 5:47:00 AM
Thank you, Connie!
Date: 6/5/2017 3:15:00 AM
oh wow, that image you create here is wonderful Kim, great write! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2017 5:47:00 AM
Thanks so much, Darren!
Date: 6/4/2017 7:03:00 PM
Beautiful haiku. A 7!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/4/2017 7:09:00 PM
Thank you, Adeniji!
Date: 6/4/2017 6:59:00 PM
...I can see the dancers shimmering atop the oily blue residue of the hot city street...nicely done Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/4/2017 7:09:00 PM
Thank you, John!

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