Summer

SUMMER his summer mirage heat waves ~ belly dance ~ across the wet steamy street 6/4/2017
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Kimathi Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 7:31 PM
I agree with Andrea, that this piece is perfect for summer!! Congrats Kim, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 7:46 PM
Thanks, Teddy!
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2017 at 2:43 PM
ohhhh, great imagery this is for summer, Kim. GREAT win. Congrats.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 8, 2017 at 3:33 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Singh Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 10:42 AM
Congrats on your win , Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 11:10 AM
Thank you, Sushma!
Devnath  Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 1:00 PM
Beautiful picture my lovely friend coloured in haiku. Loved always, bl
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 3:55 PM
Thank you, BL!
Kannan Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 11:46 AM
Great imagery... Very well done...
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 3:53 PM
Thank you, Supraja!
Green Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 10:18 AM
Beautiful imagery in this Kim. It definitely creates a summer feeling for me.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 10:59 AM
Thanks, Chris!
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 5:15 AM
There is fantastic imagery in this little gem Kim! I love it! : )
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 5:47 AM
Thank you, Connie!
White Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 3:15 AM
oh wow, that image you create here is wonderful Kim, great write! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 5:47 AM
Thanks so much, Darren!
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 7:03 PM
Beautiful haiku. A 7!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 7:09 PM
Thank you, Adeniji!
Lawless Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 6:59 PM
...I can see the dancers shimmering atop the oily blue residue of the hot city street...nicely done Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
June 4, 2017 at 7:09 PM
Thank you, John!
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