Summer

Hot, June day
traffic jams snake
to turquoise ocean
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Agustin Avatar
August 26, 2025 at 7:21 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Gazbowski Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 10:20 PM
Nicely penned haiku.
Allison Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 4:23 PM
oh soon the holidays will be upon us and we will witness this scene - great haiku:-) hugs Jan xx
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