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Swirling drifts of sugared sand slipping through your sun-jeweled hand. Treasure seeking on the shore as up above you seagulls soar. Billowed hair on skin so golden; for this warmth you are beholden. Maybe hike a mountain high and gaze into an azure sky. Or waltz along a forested path at times enduring nature's wrath. In gardens and fields so lush and green sweet summer fruits are everywhere seen. A sparkling season of beauty and sun too soon is ended once begun. written 1/3/2015 for Shadow's contest

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Date: 1/11/2015 9:24:00 PM
Deb, congratulations on your Awesome Season win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/10/2015 6:21:00 PM
Lovely Deb... Verlena
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Date: 1/6/2015 1:59:00 AM
Wonderful imagery Deb n so is the win! Big congrats!
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Date: 1/5/2015 9:18:00 PM
I enjoyed the pleasing images in the write, congrats on the win, deb
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Date: 1/5/2015 10:39:00 AM
Marching couplets that sing as they parade down the page. Marvelous images for us to enjoy ... and so I did. Loved your summer poem !! Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 1/5/2015 8:07:00 AM
splendid poem Debs congrats on win hugs
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Date: 1/5/2015 7:49:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Deb:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/3/2015 3:00:00 PM
Summer's pleasures are attractively presented through your sweet words, Deb. I love summer! A #7 gl in contest. // paul
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Date: 1/3/2015 7:00:00 AM
- Beautiful,dear Deb ..... you make me yearn for the sun and summer - Good luck in the contest - I wish you a peaceful and beautiful new year - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/3/2015 4:56:00 AM
such beautiful couplets with glorious imagery and personification - good luck:-) Hugs jan xxx
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