Teddy Kimathi Poet Acrostic

Summer

Sun warmed the noon air, as
Umbrellas gave a shade to girls in bikinis.
Marvel of nature was visible with ocean waves
Made, as they moved with vigor. 
Everyone around the scene had something worth
Remembering, for the rest of their lives!


Date: 29/09/2014

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Hansteven Selfa January 12, 2016 at 8:10 AM Teddy, congratulations on the win! :)

Jan Allison January 10, 2016 at 2:38 PM Dropping back with my congrats Teddy:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Mcloughlin January 10, 2016 at 2:25 PM Many congrats on your acrostic win Teddy! From Jean

Kim Merryman January 9, 2016 at 9:06 PM A great look at a summer day at the ocean! Congrats on your placement in the contest, Teddy! Love, Kim

James Inman January 9, 2016 at 4:43 PM Nice write, Teddy, paints a wonderful picture.

Skat A January 9, 2016 at 3:51 PM Teddy, Congrats on your ACROSTIC POEM... SKAT

Balveen Cheema January 9, 2016 at 8:51 AM Like the concept of everyone remembering something! Congrats Teddy!

Sandra Haight January 9, 2016 at 7:30 AM You painted such a lovely image of summer, Teddy. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Sandra

Poet Destroyer A January 8, 2016 at 11:23 PM awesome win...LINDA Teddy Kimathi January 9, 2016 at 2:36 AM Thanks Linda! *^_^* <3

Beautiful Scars January 8, 2016 at 9:30 PM Congrats on your placement :) Teddy Kimathi January 9, 2016 at 2:35 AM Thank you so much Laura! *^_^* <3

Andrea Dietrich January 8, 2016 at 9:17 PM Teddy, I see this is one I saw a few years ago. In fact, my comment from before is right under this one. haha. Good thing you chose one I had loved from before! Congrats. Teddy Kimathi January 9, 2016 at 2:34 AM Lol. Thanks Andrea! I'm deeply honored... I'll add it to my own classics collection! *^_^* <3

Andrea Dietrich September 29, 2014 at 3:56 PM Love it, because it really suits my memory of this season!! Teddy Kimathi September 30, 2014 at 12:04 AM That's wonderful Andrea! In Africa, we have only Summer and Spring....lolest. :-0

Jan Allison September 29, 2014 at 7:47 AM lovely summer acrostic - sadly here in the UK summer is over all too soon:-) Hugs Jan xx Teddy Kimathi September 30, 2014 at 12:02 AM Lol. Don't worry Jan. You won't know when Summer comes knocking at your door once again! ^_^ Thanks for loving my acrostic! <3