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Summer

Assessments done summer sets in motion Fatigue! way out? Screamed I Gonna teach you a great feel, mom so certain do away with fatigue, great! Screamed I all in family moved with dash in motor crack of dawn by sanctuary thrilled we riding shotgun on the move by motor trembling in fear held our hands we baboons on all sides so near burr run off with our snacks cried I you crazy stags with branched antlers move great picture foliage with blossoms circulates aroma freshly sparrows,parrots,cuckoos taking to the air flies taking wings great sight pleasure mom raised smile fatigue any more dear I yelled great mom so energizing very clever

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Bukang Liwayway

Date: 8/17/2013 12:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win friend Jenish..It's an awesome poem of yours. Have a nice day..cheers!! :) Maria

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 8/15/2013 9:02:00 AM

Congrats on your win in the Member's contest on August 14, 2013 of Poet Destroyer A. Thanks Jenish for appreciating my poem The Pen. You are very kind. Love -Mohammad

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/15/2013 4:43:00 AM

congrats on a fine win Shadow x smiles

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2013 5:35:00 PM

Hi Jenish, , ~CONGRATULATIONS~ . thank you for the awesome entry. When you have time enjoy the winners on my XOOL blog * Called "Just For You" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15796&PoetID=18720 Take care --- xox Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2013 8:39:00 AM

this seems like an adventure, such love you have for your mother great teachers in life our mothers are, enjoyed your write, always, Linda

Poet. Undertaker
Date: 7/30/2013 6:16:00 AM

linda my son wanted me to write a poem on the theme "forest" for his class assignment.I wanted to make it little interesting and this was the outcome. The truth is his mother teaches him very great devotion.thank you.