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Summer

Sultry sky
Undulating uplands
Majestic mountains
Magnificent moments
Exciting escapes.
Reality relieved.

© July 12, 2011
Dane Smith-Johnsen

natureseasonsacrostic

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Amanda Moore

July 15, 2011 at 2:50 PM

This is a good acrostic for several reasons. You chose a word limit that is equal for each line which makes it pleasant to look at and easy to read. Choosing two word lines is brave it is not easy to write acrostic in only two lines and you used wonderfully descriptive words to give the reader beautiful imagery!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

July 15, 2011 at 5:35 PM

Thank you Amanda for your most kind comment.

Ralph Taylor

July 13, 2011 at 1:28 PM

Congrats on your win, Dane Ann. Excellent piece. xxxRalph

Edward Mccormick

July 13, 2011 at 1:07 PM

Loved how you made this 1st and 2nd word Acrostic. Very unique and great fun to read! Congrats winner! ~ECMc

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 13, 2011 at 12:32 PM

Congrats Dane Ann on your super win with this lovely entry ...

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 13, 2011 at 9:11 AM

Congratulations Dane Ann for your win in the contest "A Poem You Like" sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

July 13, 2011 at 6:22 AM

Congrats my dear on your win.... well written....always Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 13, 2011 at 4:55 AM

Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry with usDane Ann . I have enjoyed reading your interesting writing today and will be back again soon to read more. May you have a most wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol