summer

summer red sunsets 
faded with the blue ocean 
hug a starry night 

above dark waters 
the stars' optimal moment
attract watching eyes 

~best twinkling instants~
a reverie to be kept
when grey winter shows

blessingcreationnightstarstarshaiku

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

August 24, 2025 at 5:23 PM

Hello Maria :-) Wonderful read!

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

August 25, 2025 at 12:11 AM

Thank you so much for your comment.

Andrea Dietrich

August 16, 2024 at 1:04 AM

This is a lovely series. End of first haiku was a stunning line

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

August 17, 2024 at 12:46 AM

Thank you so much Andrea for your kind words.!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

August 13, 2024 at 5:35 AM

Dear Maria, I felt like I was right there, watching the changing skies and seasons. What wonderful haikus! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

August 13, 2024 at 8:22 AM

Thank you very much dear Daniel, for passing by and for your lovely words. Have a pleasant day.!

Victor Buhagiar

August 13, 2024 at 1:47 AM

Can you see beyond the horizon? There's winter there. Splendid talent.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

August 13, 2024 at 2:33 AM

Thank you dear Victor. My grandfather used to say, when the cuckoo bird leaves smells to winter in the air. It usually leaves by the first days of August. Anyway, we still have hot days here, but the days start to be shorter. I hope you are enjoying summer. Have a great day my friend.!

Darlene De Beaulieu

August 12, 2024 at 3:15 PM

Hello Maria, To be by the water on a sunset night is perfect to see the stars. It is also perfect to see the sunset. A sunset over the water is so beautiful. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu

August 13, 2024 at 10:14 AM

Hello0 Maria, Summer is coming to an end. Yet we still have Indian Summer to look forward to. /Hugs. & Love, /Darlene/

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

August 12, 2024 at 4:41 PM

Thank you my dear. It s always nice to see a sunset. Love a lot/María